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by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Monday, September 01, 2003

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I walk in the silence of my forest,
Passing the beauty of all I see,
No one questions me here,
No one making me be
Something I am not…

So tired from the battles I fought,
To simply live another day,
Resting by the banks of my river,
I keep the world at bay…

Your whisper in my forest,
And the gentle breeze,
Echoes your call,

And you don’t see how deeply
My heart fell,
How I plunge into the dark abyss,
It’s not my life I missed!
And I don’t want to tell!

I never learned to speak,
Of the pain which carved my heart in stone,
All my life I lived alone,
And loved every moment of silence,
Dwell in a place few can find,
Your world is not kind!

So I chose to live here,
In the Forest of the Moon,
I do not wish to see the sun,
Rising so brightly at noon!

It is the shadows I love,
The moon which shines so softly
From above,
The silence here I learned to love!

Yet you whisper always,
Of my life from hell…
I lived it!
I don’t want to visit there again,
Why can’t you understand?
It isn’t where I want to be!

Why can’t you see?
I am safe here and happy,
I am hidden by the darkness,
Wrapped in the beauty of my trees,
So tall and brave and free,
So lovely to me…

I sit here crying softly,
Tears that make so sound,
As they fall to the ground,
And always the shivering among the trees,
Playing echoes that pierce my heart,

Is all I hear,
Something I cannot bear to say…
So instead of answering you,
I walk away…

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Reviewed by Tami Ryan 9/12/2003
Whew! This is one excellent write!

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 9/3/2003
The trees hear,no need to tell.
I loved this poem very much.
Best wishes
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 9/2/2003
Strange how we sometimes find comfort in sadness. Beautifully written, mi'lady.

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 9/1/2003
I see beauty in the shadows too..A stunning, heartfelt poem....Raw emotion can be so very beautiful.....ty, Dani
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations 9/1/2003
So painful... but so beautiful, sweet Reindeer... **tear splashing on a soft smile**
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 9/1/2003
Love this, Reindeer! Sounds like me....
excellent write...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 9/1/2003
Very beautiful write, Retta!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 9/1/2003
So poignant and beautiful Retta.
Reviewed by Christine Morell 9/1/2003
Extremely beautiful, Reindeer.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/1/2003
Beautiful photo! Great write!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/1/2003
I love the forest, but hate the bugs, so I always carry a can of Off. Awesome write, and beautiful picture. Have a great rest of the day!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/1/2003
Beautiful and very touching Retta!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/1/2003
A forest is my contentment, too.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/1/2003
Into the library with this one! The art enhances your words, they are so beautifully said!
Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen 9/1/2003
OOoh, Retta, this one's a keeper! Beautiful and touching.

Julie :)
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