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Don't read BETWEEN my lines.
by Kay P M- Devenish

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Read my LINES,
NOT
between them... please.
My sweat is there in these.

Don't read BETWEEN my lines
in ANY Of my rhymes,
There are NO secrets in there to covey,
no secret issues there at play.
For me, poetry is not a game,
if it were,I'd leave off my name.

Just read WHAT
the LINES say,
facts and fiction there,plain as day.
Why ignore the line?
What use then is my rhyme?
a WASTE of good time is BETWEEN the line.


My lines say how I feel
the meaning there is real
I do NOT walk on a fence
(and I mean this with no offence)
my lines are all black and white
how I feel is how I write
don't look under or on top
the actual line's the place to stop.
There are NO secret issues underscore,
don't read between my lines ANYMORE.
I have the urge to put my views on the line...
look for me there NOT IN your own mind.
I don't need the yellow OF in between,
THE LINE....ITSELF...
says WHAT I mean.
Poetry for me is my expression time,
so please,
Just read ON the line.


FOOTNOTE:
Anyone who knows me knows I do not pussy foot around
if I have smething to say,I say it...write it,I get really angry if anyone suggests there are secret issues between my lines....that is just plain old hog wash..THERE ARE NO SECRET ISSUES ....I AM(now and always) an open book,read me if you dare,if not...
my lines will still be there,they won't care.
Sorry,but I am just ssssooooooo
tired of the bull shit.



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Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
Kay.. this is quite interesting.. it feels like you read my thoughts. (smile) I say this very thing often.. but I must apologize.. I suggested more than one level on your goldfish poem.. forgive me if I stuck my toe in too 'deep'.. hehe.. sigh.. sometimes what's there is in the mind of the 'beholder'.. I love knowing that what I see IS what I'm getting! You do it well.. Take care.. katy xox.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
(((kay)))

read all the lines, not between the lines...and loved what i read

excellent rant, and keep writing...don't ever stop

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
And here I was gong to make a joke about it being hard not too as they keep reaching out and pinching me...;-) Guess I have always understood you, as you are like me...straight shooter. Enjoyed this, and didn't have to read between your lines. LOL ~Trish~
Reviewed by Digital Fairy
He-llo! This says it all... Point was well taken :)

--Karissa
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Just write whats in your heart, head and soul Kay...it comes out in outstanding poetry.
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Oh, bless you! If I had a nickel from everybody who found hidden meanings in what I didn't say, well, I might not be rich, but I'd sure as hell be a happy camper.

Thank you for this one!
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Kay....excellent my friend!!!!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
I am with you on this one Kay!!

If people read something between my lines I know I did a good job!!

I made them think!!

You write right on!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese
you poetry is always very succinct... well done!
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Hooray!! Hootsy for you Kay!!! Tell it like it is ... no reson to tolerate the bull shit. Let ths chips fly with your broad cutting axe. I promise to accept your words as the facts and not look between the lines for things I can't find; cause they are not there. Great expression of feelings. Bill Murray
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
I agree Wholeheartedly Kay, it is what it is, and i like what it is, as I like who you are my friend.
((((((hugs))))))
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
P.S.

I forgot to mention:

Great vent with this write!

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

P.S. Will be away for a few days, please read May Lu's Blog of today's.

~ SA ~
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Hi Kay:

Remember that there are so many people in this world, do not try to please everyone. Just always write what you feel is right, and how you feel. It's YOURSELF that you have to please first. Don't let others get to you and bother you.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
This was great Kay, I love your poetry so much!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
You've always said it like it is. Some folks just have to play their little games. Always keep writing your lines and then I'll be fine.
SMooooooooooooo00000000000CH! A Smoooch is a Smoooch, there is nothing else in there. Have a great night Kay!
Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
Hi Kay
I have missed you. No matter what anyone misperceives I encourage you to keep writing.
People's perceptions of art are about them, not about you. You have greatly inspired me.
Vicky
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Kay? Don't let anyone dictate what or how you write! You are top notch and need no instructions! This is a fantastic write!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Good write on how your feel about yourself and your written work.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Lady even if there were secrets between the lines is no one's business but your own! WELL DONE, Kay.
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Some of what I write is from my emotions.....and some from my imagination...lol otherwise I'd be locked up in a pretty white cell.

Just follow your muse...and hope the reader follows you :)

Great stuff Kay!.......Love, Dani

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