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Whispering Winds
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Monday, September 01, 2003

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Whispering Winds

The winds blow through the trees,
Making them shiver,
And they whisper among themselves,
That someone new has entered the forest,

Walking along the trails,
They watch him,
And warn of his coming,
Whispering to me;
A stranger draws near…”

They warn me of the beauty
They see in your eyes,
The whispering winds,
Led me to you,
Warning me to beware
Of the love they see inside…

On a path of dark beauty,
I heard a sound,
And turned to find,
You staring at me…

I could not bear the sadness
In your lovely eyes,
Nor watch the tears fall
So silently to the earth below…

And I went to you,
Though the winds whispered
“Stay back, stay away…”
But I could not that day…

Nor any day after,
I loved you,
From the first moment
You came into my view…

I held your hands,
And felt the love flow,
Filling my heart,
With peace and beauty,
Ah, but my trust is slow,
And the winds whisper;

“You don’t know…”
But I do,
I know one thing alone,
I love you…

My heart whispers,
You love me too…
Shall we sit here forever?
And listen to the winds whisper
A new tune?

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Reviewed by Handsum Hart 9/5/2003
the winds are whispering this is beautiful and I agree. peace
Reviewed by Digital Fairy 9/2/2003
Oh, this took my breath away, moved me to the core... A fine weave of romance and poetry :)

Reviewed by Christine Morell 9/2/2003
Hauntingly beautiful.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/2/2003
a gentle and tender write; thoroughly enjoyed! :D (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
Reviewed by Dale Clark 9/2/2003
A beautiful piece. One must listen
to the whispering wind! ;)
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes 9/2/2003
{insert heartfelt sigh here} Ahhhhhhhh.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 9/2/2003
A lovely and tender read.

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 9/2/2003
Exceptional write!!!!
Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader) 9/2/2003
Beautiful, Retta.
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 9/2/2003
Yes, tell those jealous winds, what do they know :):) Sensational, Reindeer
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 9/1/2003
Such softness upon the breeze with these words. Wonderful write, Reindeer.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/1/2003
Awesomely haunting but beautiful Retta!!

We are whispering the night!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 9/1/2003
Very wonderful write, these whispering winds.
Reviewed by Birdie Houston 9/1/2003
Awesomely haunting and mystical !
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/1/2003
Reindeer,such haunting beauty! You always make it exciting;-)!
Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen 9/1/2003
I love how you personified the wind, Retta! I could just hear that tiny whooshing voice zipping around me in graceful distress!! :)
Reviewed by jude forese 9/1/2003
romantic excellence!
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) 9/1/2003
The whispers that echo in the recesses of our minds are there to keep us cautious of step, but never let them stop your journey.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/1/2003
This is perfect. A gem of romance at its best.
Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) 9/1/2003
excellent write ,.... Superb ...
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