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A Perfect Star by Toris Okotie Tuesday, September 02, 2003 Share Print Save Become a Fan

On a night sky lay my lonely heart Searching through the pile of stars For my one true and only love But the sun came and washes them off Before I could find that one so perfect I now I lay on my waiting bed Looking up to the night sky Waiting again to find that star Whose glitter makes my heart well And its sparkly leaves me with lasting hope Tonight, I said to myself Will be the last night for my search For something tells me well I’ll find my perfect star
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Reviewed by William Heffner	12/24/2003

The pursuit of perfection is within all of us, thanks for sharing the hope of victory. God Bless You and Your Loved Ones Officer William Heffner Happy Holidays!




Reviewed by Sandra Corona	9/15/2003

Some of the most 'perfect' stars are 'imperfect' but yet perfect to the eyes of those who love them. Beautiful thoughts well woven. :)Sandy




Reviewed by Afrika Abney	9/6/2003

What a free flowing and inspirational piece, thanks for sharing this piece with us. One Love




Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)	9/4/2003

Toris this is a beautiful piece, and may you have your wish! ~Nikki~




Reviewed by jude forese	9/3/2003

excellent poem...




Reviewed by Kate Clifford	9/2/2003

Wonderful, beautiful write!




Reviewed by Trixie Love	9/2/2003

Hi Toris, Beautiful write... Trixie :)




Reviewed by Floreann Cawley	9/2/2003

a perfect poem my friend..Floreann *****




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	9/2/2003

beautiful write, toris! my best to you! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.




Reviewed by E T Waldron	9/2/2003

Beautiful Toris! May it be as you wish!




Reviewed by Zenith Elliott	9/2/2003

Toris, this is beautiful. I know you will find your perfect star!! ~Z~