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A Perfect Star
by Toris Okotie

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On a night sky lay my lonely heart

Searching through the pile of stars

For my one true and only love

But the sun came and washes them off

Before I could find that one so perfect


I now I lay on my waiting bed

Looking up to the night sky

Waiting again to find that star

Whose glitter makes my heart well

And its sparkly leaves me with lasting hope



Tonight, I said to myself

Will be the last night for my search

For something tells me well

Iíll find my perfect star

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Reviewed by William Heffner
The pursuit of perfection is within all of us, thanks for sharing the hope of victory.

God Bless You and Your Loved Ones

Officer William Heffner

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Reviewed by Sandra Corona
Some of the most 'perfect' stars are 'imperfect' but yet perfect to the eyes of those who love them.
Beautiful thoughts well woven.
Reviewed by Afrika Abney
What a free flowing and inspirational piece, thanks for sharing this piece with us. One Love
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Toris this is a beautiful piece, and may you have your wish!
Reviewed by jude forese
excellent poem...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Wonderful, beautiful write!
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Hi Toris,
Beautiful write...

Trixie :)
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
a perfect poem my friend..Floreann *****
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
beautiful write, toris! my best to you! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Beautiful Toris! May it be as you wish!
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Toris, this is beautiful. I know you will find your perfect star!! ~Z~
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