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A Perfect Star
by Toris Okotie

Tuesday, September 02, 2003

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On a night sky lay my lonely heart


Searching through the pile of stars


For my one true and only love


But the sun came and washes them off


Before I could find that one so perfect


 


I now I lay on my waiting bed


Looking up to the night sky


Waiting again to find that star


Whose glitter makes my heart well


And its sparkly leaves me with lasting hope


 


 


Tonight, I said to myself


Will be the last night for my search


For something tells me well


Iíll find my perfect star

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Reviewed by William Heffner 12/24/2003
The pursuit of perfection is within all of us, thanks for sharing the hope of victory.

God Bless You and Your Loved Ones

Officer William Heffner

Happy Holidays!
Reviewed by Sandra Corona 9/15/2003
Some of the most 'perfect' stars are 'imperfect' but yet perfect to the eyes of those who love them.
Beautiful thoughts well woven.
:)Sandy
Reviewed by Afrika Abney 9/6/2003
What a free flowing and inspirational piece, thanks for sharing this piece with us. One Love
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 9/4/2003
Toris this is a beautiful piece, and may you have your wish!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by jude forese 9/3/2003
excellent poem...
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/2/2003
Wonderful, beautiful write!
Reviewed by Trixie Love 9/2/2003
Hi Toris,
Beautiful write...


Trixie :)
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley 9/2/2003
a perfect poem my friend..Floreann *****
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/2/2003
beautiful write, toris! my best to you! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/2/2003
Beautiful Toris! May it be as you wish!
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 9/2/2003
Toris, this is beautiful. I know you will find your perfect star!! ~Z~
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