To my oppressor.
by Kay P M- Devenish
Wednesday, September 03, 2003
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MY COMPUTER WAS HACKED INTO THIS POEM IS FOR THE CULPRIT.(Not den related)
To my oppressor.
Go ahead,tear me to pieces,
throw my shreds on the floor,
rip me apart,
fling down my heart,
beat me down 'till I'm raw.
Go ahead,crush me to smithereens,
pound me into a pulp,
smash me and crash me
flogg me and thrash me,
squeeze my throat' till I gulp.
Lash me until I am bleeding,
nash me until I am pleading,
shatter my soul,
quarter my whole,
do what your spirit desires...
BUT
when your plunder has ended,
and you are sleeping in bliss,
I will arise ,
and I'll look in your eyes
for...
I'm so MUCH stronger than this.
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
9/8/2003 |
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| Unbelievable! I've heard that other's have had this happening here in AD.. but your response.. em.. jaysus.. I feel empowered just having read it.. what a marvelous sense of self you have.. they can do their 'dirty deeds' but they can't touch your essence.. your core.. you, Kay, are the sort of person I strive to be! You even managed to be playful in your rant here.. sarcasm is gorgeous and you do it soooooo well! You've got a friend.. never hesitate to look me up. I mean that! I'm just collapsed with respect for your delivery here. sigh. love, katy xox. |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
9/5/2003 |
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| A powerful write |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
9/3/2003 |
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Boy can i relate to this. I love the way you have expressed your frustrations, and your triumph, way to go!
My Son goes to college, and one of his mates, wrote a virus, which he though was hilarious, it caused the screen to go spaz out go one way and then back the other! He has sent it to my address you see, then the same kid wrote another, which caused the disc try to go in and out about half a dozen times !! I was not amused and put his pot on, as this is where it all starts, with these little brainiacs and their harmless viruses. Needless to say, My son got a severe dressing down ;)
(((((((((Ch'erie)))))))))) |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
9/3/2003 |
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Very powerful, Kay. Bravo
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
9/3/2003 |
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| you tell 'em, kay! BONZER write! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. *clapping* |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/3/2003 |
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Powerful Kay!!
I included you in my next bababoob ride okay!!
lol!! Will post it on the weekend!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
9/3/2003 |
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| Powerful write, I hope you find out who did the dirty deed. ~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
9/3/2003 |
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I loved this Kay, beautiful strength in this!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
9/3/2003 |
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| It is probably someone with way too much time on their hands. Kick ass! |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
9/3/2003 |
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| Yes Kay you are stronger than that. And you will always rise above the bitterness. Great write, from a strong will. Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
9/3/2003 |
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| Kay, well done. After reading this I would definitely sleep with one eye open.(lol) |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/3/2003 |
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| Clapping!!!! Great powerful write! |
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