|Reviewed by Amanda Fousek
|Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
|Dale this is great - it soooo describes the last poem I posted to the Den... It lasted less than a day before I erased it because I simply um over-exposed myself so-to-speak!! This describes a line of tension in every poets expression, I think, because poetry bipasses conventional communication restraints to share something of one's soul.... and how much is too much???
A thought-provoking write, thank you!
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|Debs really explained it well. Quiet a write...Dale!
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*ģ
|One can feel the pain and regret in this piece.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Dale...this is a profound write my friend...excellent!!!!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh!! Dale this is so powerful and heartwrenching!!
This one goes hand in hand with my poem today!!
Seems to me we are having the blues again!!
Tears....Hugs.....chin up okay!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Dale,I feel pain here! Very potent verse, a sense of guilt and regret with deep sorrow. Hope it's just your superb poetry!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was powerfully emotional, I loved your verses here,
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|Very heavy, but very good. I appreciate the pain in this. Great write. ~SH~|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Profound and meaningful. Excellent poetry as always.
|Reviewed by Floreann Cawley