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can't think...
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

Wednesday, September 03, 2003

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canít think
canít get in

i pushed my brain
pulled too hard
i took the strings
wove silken thread
now mind is dead

i canít get in
canít think

i pen a thought
muse a line
i walk a maze
the feeling breaks
i lose the pace

canít get in
canít think

Erin Moen
9/3/03
Copyright 2003 ©

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Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 9/5/2003
You got in, excellent work Erin! YF ~Z~
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 9/5/2003
Awesome work again Erin, and geez do I ever know exactly what you mean!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 9/5/2003
Erin..If this isn't recognized by everyone here we have all gone 'brain dead'.. HOWEVER.. said by you, in your way, gives new, almost inviting meaning to the dreaded 'writers block'.. I want the one you've got if it means I'll write like this! (smile) This is truly cool. love, katy xox.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/4/2003
The thinking will come back. Sometimes we try and think too hard.
Enjoyed! Have a great night.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/4/2003
You put it so well, see how you think;-)methinks it's catching;-)
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 9/4/2003
Hi Erin...so good to be reading you again...oh been there...done that...great write....floria
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 9/4/2003
Don't you just hate getting locked out? Clever write.

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Afrika Abney 9/4/2003
Wonderful write, keep up the great work. One Love
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes 9/4/2003
Three deep breaths - it'll come...just be patient.
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 9/4/2003
Know the feeling...excellent write.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 9/4/2003
Do you ever wonder why every one is smiling except you?
Reviewed by anne cunningham 9/4/2003
all the kings horses, and all the kings men, will someone please put erin's head back together again. :)
Reviewed by Dale Clark 9/4/2003
I've been there, everyday in fact. lol
Great write!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/4/2003
hehehe...know the feeling...excellently expressed!!

LOvE tInKa..can't think!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 9/3/2003
excellent write....beautifully exprssed!!!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 9/3/2003
I've had a few days like that..excellently expressed!

Reindeer
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) 9/3/2003
Yeah, Erin, I can relate to this in a BIG way! Wonderful poem, put a wry smile on my face!
Reviewed by Londis Carpenter 9/3/2003
I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed reading this but i can't think right now.
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 9/3/2003
Hahaha! No kidding? I wonder why? Hehehe, I hope tomorrow, you will be better.
Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen 9/3/2003
This should be called "Writer's Block"! LOL! Been there, done that! Touche, Erin!

Jules :)
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/3/2003
I have had days like that! Great write.
Reviewed by Veronica Hosking 9/3/2003
I know how you feel, Erin. Of course having 2 kids destroy the room behind you doesn't help. ;D
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