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A Beautiful Girl
by J. W. Murphy
Thursday, September 04, 2003

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*Aug.29, 2003. This is a poke at the media and advertising pigs who use women as sex objects to sell their products. It is to show what their greed does to young girls.
Beautiful girl: any young woman today, perfect woman: media's model woman turned sex symbol

a Beautiful girl
                                   looks at Vanity Fair
a perfect woman
                                   stares back at her
a Beautiful girl
                                   compares herself
a perfect woman
                                   has wider hips
a Beautiful girl
                                   eyes her breasts
a perfect woman
                                    has bigger ones
a Beautiful girl
                                    feels her rump
a perfect woman's
                                    is way more plump
a Beautiful girl
                                    licks her lips
a perfect woman's
                                    are moist and thick
a Beautiful girl
                                    thinks deep within
a perfect woman 
                                    I will become
a Beautiful girl
                                    walks off in haste
a perfect woman
                                    her dreams to chase
a Beautiful girl
                                    already has it all
a perfect woman
                                    doesn't exist

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 4/4/2007
This is a powerful and true statement. So many girls (women) compare themselves to the "perfect media-presented" woman and despair at never being able to reach that "goal." They are beautiful just as they are. Thank you. Love and peace,

Reviewed by Tami Ryan 9/6/2003
"Perfect" is a relative term, n'est ce pas? It is only within a woman's mind and with the acceptance of herself that she can be so. And once she accepts and loves herself, it is only then that others can love her for who she truly is...

Very well penned.
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 9/6/2003
You have merely stated what I have believed all my life...but the perfect woman does exist and are everywhere...when their beauty comes from within. Excellent writing!
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 9/5/2003
Excellany creativeness ~J~!!!!
As for we not so beautiful and far from perfect women WE really are out here! ;O)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 9/5/2003
Well, at least I've THOUGHT I've been in contact with perfect women from time to time. Of course we all know that it wasn't my brain that was imagining this fantasy.
Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta 9/4/2003
You got that right! I never see any fat women walking around. Only the near Perfects are out and about. The others hide because of all of what you said.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/4/2003
hehehehe...right on!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 9/4/2003
Great write, full of wisdom.
Reviewed by Leland Waldrip 9/4/2003
It's those fuzzy measures again.
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) 9/4/2003
this is cool! you did a great job on this. bravo!
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