|Reviewed by jude forese
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Fantastic write !|
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Great piece of poetry. Excellent.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|This is brilliant, Erin. How could any of us profess to be or to feel free if we ignore what's happening..? YOu've written rhetorically.. and you've made it work to perfection... simple, brief and powerful! What a woman! love, katy xox.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most excellent poetry Erin!!
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|A great example of poetry...your lines outline emotion like a chalkline around a body at a crime scene. What doesn't fly...soars.
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|An invitation to soar with insistent questions drilling for answers. A thought provoking write, Erin.
|Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen
|OOh, LOVED the third stanza! Excellent!
|Reviewed by Marvin Kirsh
|dear Erin-liked this one. Briefly expressed
with depth. Some time we create viscious/futile repetitive frustration for ourselves and others when we write too much between the lines-no one can exactly stand in anothers shoes and shpild be the point where we draw the line to stop /(if we dont know where(the line betweeeen my shoes and yours)- it is never to venture too far). Others dont know ther lifes values and priorities of applying some effort and intellect to this fact-a fact of wheels and wings for flight. Marvin
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love this one!!!!!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wondrous Erin, with you around anyone could fly;-)|
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|a very excellent poem|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|I believe I can fly! Sorry Erin, that's a song.....smile... Now, if certain people would stay out of my way, I could soar instead of flapping like a new bird....excellent write, Erin! Brings out such emotion...
|Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
|Erin, this was Excellent! ~Z~|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|Oooh, such ambiguity. Such passion. Can there be both? You carried it off.|