|Reviewed by serenety L
|A wonderful one. I can almost see the white sky and feel what you wanted us to feel when you wrote these lines.
|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|Oh so beautiful...thanks friend 4 sharing!
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|Wow, Dale, I may have to pass my "Profound Crown" over to you!! This piece aches with humanity and insight. Love the image of "sky white", like an obliteration of...everything that should be. One of your best!! :)|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Exquisite imagery, well penned poem.|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
loved the imagery
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Dale....very gentle write my friend!!!!|
|Reviewed by L M (Reader)
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
So gentle and eautiful....
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|..ahhh Dale your imagery is astonishing..you truly have a way with words...ty..this goes into my library!!
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|So Beautiful CJ,
On the orange-pink morning we spied
The horses in clover filled meadow
Surrounded by a foggy mist
within flowed our tears of last night
This mirage of a dream
which lingers along side the bed
welcome lovers back again "
|Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
|I found this so visual... good write|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Dale!!!!! This is the most divine poem.....ty for sharing this with us all.....ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Stunning imagery in this beauty.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Absolutely beautiful Dale!!
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Absolutely beautiful Dale, I loved this one, wonderfully written,