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Short Story Thinking
by Erin E Kelly-Moen

Sunday, September 07, 2003

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Shortened blinking
...time lapses.

Short story thinking
...time passes.

Synapses linking
...time waxes.

Erin Moen
Copyright 2003

Started my first short story yesterday. In 24 hours, I've got 410 words in 11 paragraphs... :D Tentative title: Wood Tick Nightmare. Needed to "unbog" my mind with a quick rhyme!

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Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 9/8/2003
Way to go, Erin. Will look forward to the end results. Great Write.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 9/8/2003
Bravo Erin...good luck man!!!!
Reviewed by E. Richardson 9/7/2003
Yep...been there..done that...I also move back and forth from verse to fiction, when I feel the creative wheels bogging....Good job here.
Reviewed by Marvin Kirsh 9/7/2003
Dear erin - I only have a single short story to my credit(Kary grant proposal). My mind always slips to reduce and condense when I attempt novels and stories-skips by the artistic-hard to keep a theme or train of thought in mind from finished product.(think to produce an epic like Dr. chivago) my
problem is how much of my life and experience is important verses an entire contrived picture painting from my perception of a master grand winning art work-never goes very far. Have though learned to be relaxed patient,of myself.-what I produce is what I produce-not really that important-hyperness itself,worry over it-is self defeating counter productive-there really is a time for everything-unless you find too much of it gone no where.
Of all your poetry the piece (and outstanding also) is of the unvisited home.
I do think a complete change of scenery help myself-there is something constant and oppressive in the air around. Marvin
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/7/2003
Rhyme wanes. Lhyme reigns. Rots the brains.
Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader) 9/7/2003
Nice rhyme!
Good luck with your story!
Reviewed by Helga Ross 9/7/2003
I know what you mean!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/7/2003
Write on oh gifted one;-)....
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 9/7/2003
Oh! This is fantastic Erin! I can't wait to read this story. Great news indeed!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/7/2003
well done erin!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/7/2003
Great way to unbog the mind :-) Wonderful write. Hope to see your story when your finished :-)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 9/7/2003
I'm interested. Go for it!
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