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will you marry me?
by Steve Patterson
Sunday, September 07, 2003

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i asked her
"will you marry me?"
she began to purrrrrrr...
she said she'd be glad to be
the She to my He
and that was for sure

nearly blew my mind
'cause she ain't been the marryin' kind
she wadn't willin' ta' open that door
in quite a while
she said she liked my style

so we set a date
a little ways out
not too early, not too late
'figgered we'd See
what this Love Be
what We both Be
all about

i wanted to shout
turn it all about
'cause you See
She said she would
if She could
She said she'd marry me

guess we'll waitn' See
just how true
this Love Be

but she did say
in everyway
she wanted to stay
she wanted to lay in my bed
instead a' sleep alone
wanted more than talkin' on the phone

she said "Yes"
so i guess
time'll tell
if this be heaven or this be hell
just let it be

She said
she'd marry me
hot damn
she said she'd marry me

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Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 9/8/2003
hope it be all gravey
hahaha hope you liked my attempt
enjoy you as always
Reviewed by Evelyn Simon 9/7/2003
This was so cute. I liked the cheerful
engery it generated. :0)
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 9/7/2003
Wonderful news Steve! May the two of you revel in a lifetime love experience that's excitingly awesome and ultra satisfying!
Reviewed by Robin Spicer 9/7/2003
Hey I like this.
When i asked, she said no.
A year later, She asked me, I said yes.
Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart 9/7/2003
Way to go,dude. Hope it's all you dream it could be. After the big day you'll have to write a poem called "will you give me the remote?"
Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle 9/7/2003
Congrats, Steve. May you have many years of happiness.
Jill :)
Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader) 9/7/2003
A very nice write!
Congradulations to you and best of luck to you.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/7/2003
(((o, steve)))

i love this write! :) you convey the excitement perfectly!

congratulations!! :) you deserve happiness

"...she said
she'd marry me
hot damn
she said she'd marry me"

WAY TO GO!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

(((HUGS))) and love,

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) 9/7/2003
Way to go sweetie. :) am so glad you have found that perfect love. You truly do deserve it.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 9/7/2003

...and you deserve the best!!!!!!!!!!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
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