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| Reviewed by Adam Walsvik |
10/1/2003 |
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I like the way the before and after spin around on axis of disaster. You put the exclamation point smack in the middle. great.
Adam |
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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
9/10/2003 |
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That moment alone in the car--MY GAWD woman! What woman has NOT done that? Young or old! I loved the storyline. Dancing slow ----I think it the only way to do it --sometimes ;) What a laser light show :)
Enjoyed reading,
Emilie |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
9/9/2003 |
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Excellent and so, so creative. i love all your writing.
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
9/8/2003 |
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| Wonderful poem, a joy to read this one! |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
9/8/2003 |
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An imaginative write ... very sweet.
~Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
9/8/2003 |
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| Excellent write!!! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/7/2003 |
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| Love this one A. nice and easy does it on and off the road;-)! |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
9/7/2003 |
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| Slow is best..A very well written poem....ty, Dani |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/7/2003 |
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| slow is nice ;) |
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| Reviewed by Birdie Houston |
9/7/2003 |
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| Very good !!!! |
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| Reviewed by Robin Spicer |
9/7/2003 |
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I have always written that love is accidental,
But when it happens? it is the best accident one can have.
I love this poem.
Rob |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
9/7/2003 |
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| Stories are better when they are true. |
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| Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl |
9/7/2003 |
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Nice story...I'm with you on the nightclub scene...thank GOODNESS I'm not single!
~Kerry |
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| Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader) |
9/7/2003 |
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Lady A,
A very romantic and loving story.
Fate can rule so many things in the outcome of our lives.
Glenna |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
9/7/2003 |
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Loved this cute story, Anita. Very creative write.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
9/7/2003 |
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What a wonderful story of a poem. So enjoyable with great happily every after ending. Love this indeed!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o) |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/7/2003 |
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| I love this one! A very orginal write. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/7/2003 |
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Aha!! Slow dance..very nice thought!!
love Tinka |
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