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The Big Foot in Heaven
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson

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Art by me. I hope all are having a great Sunday.



When heavens door is open
I will have probably lost my token

Heaven may not be what I perceive it to be,
but if it only has peace
that will be enough for me.



Ron Axelson
9/7/03
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Reviewed by serenety L
Love that pic.
I am sure that all of us will find peace there. And those who interefere we'll kick out.....
Nico
Reviewed by Melissa Rives
LOL....nah Ron...you'll not lose your token! :)
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon
This was delightful..and the art is wonderful, as usual. ;) Silver
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
great Ron. I'd be glad just to really know theres is a heaven, then if hell is my route, then the big boot can just kick me out. Then I'd burn knowing what I really foolishly missed. G
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Cute write!!!
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
..hey..you ARE talented!!! Wow!! What a sense of humour..we need this lightness of spirit in the Den..perhaps we should all turn to writing humourous poetry...hmmm..
Vesna
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley
good and great..Floreann
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Ron I love your humor!
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Maybe I'll use that token if you already have a free pass..... excellent verse, Sketchman. You touch on something many think about, I'm sure....
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
this is so cute....hope everyone is right i haveholes in my pockets Smile
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
You will get in for sure Ron,you are an angel already.
Best wishes always
from
kay
Reviewed by jude forese
you won't need a token you probably have a free pass ;) great sketch...
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Very nice, Ron... great sketch.. You always brighten up my nights with your pics and writes...
Hugs
Jenni
Reviewed by Lynn Barry
That's a mighty BIG toe...I got a kick out of it...hee hee...you're the best...cuzz you are...
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
He he :)......I'm going to make sure I stick my foot in the door.....Love your humour Ron....thanks, Dani
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Excellent verse and Pic Ron! I liked this!

Reindeer
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Ron Hon hahaha you are so adorable;-)LOve the sketch, but I know he will have His hand out to welcome you sweet man!smoooooooooch!!!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Ron,
Excellent pic and verses is good....
I like this one but your too sweet he is never gonna kick you out...
Peg
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
(((ron)))

*kewl pic* and a write with a message--well done

naaaaaah, don't think God would kick you out...just make sure you're right with Him "now is the accepted time of salvation" *can't remember where exactly that is in the Bible*

now, me, as buttery fingered and forgetful as i am, would definately lose my token *where DID i put that dang thing?* :)

(((HUGS))) and much love,

karla. :)
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
... maybe you will be part of the left behind group, like me; somebody has to be left to fight the last fight.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
If you don't make it, few of us will.

Great write :-)
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
I'll save some for you sweetie....great write.
Reviewed by Trixie Love
Hi Ron,
Such a nice write...
Naaaa, I don't believe
that you would get booted
out of there...

Love the sketch..lol


Trixie :)
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
There is now way you will be kicked out of heaven Ronny!!
Your heart is tooo big!!

Peace to you!!

Wow!! Love your pic!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
I cannot imagine you getting kicked out of heaven for any reason, Ron. Love the write and your sketch.
Amor
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Ron I am so sure heaven is peaceful....and I am also sure you won't get kicked out....this was too cute....floria
Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader)
Sketchman,
I very cool picture. I think peace in heaven will be enough for all of us.
Keep writing!
Glenna
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Cute write, Sketchman, and love the sketch, but I sure hope God doesn't do that to you! That would be AWFUL if He kicked you out of Heaven! (((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :)

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