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For the star I could not reach.
by Kay P M- Devenish
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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I could NOT reach the star YOU are

but try I did ALL night

and now,content,

my days are spent

r e m e m b e r i n g

 YOUR light
.

 

p.s.

Here I am... a tear you shed,
falling on sweet words once said...
splattered, I evaporate... 
into a blue, uncertain, fate.

  
   
 
 
 
 

 

 

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Reviewed by Steve Ralph
once again a very sad but brilliantly written poem,
You are of course Kay a star in your own right,
for there are few that can write in the way you do with so few words to say so much.
It is a pleasure to read,
take care my Ausy friend.
Reviewed by Connie Faust
I'm finding that you are incredibly talented with words. A sweet and poignant poem.
Connie
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Concise, creative, unique and meaningful; well done, Kay. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
I want what Tinka is smoking...Ed
Reviewed by jude forese
eloquent brevity ...
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Kay,

Very unique!! Delivered with great poetic precision ... loved it!!


Best wishes,

Robert
Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
That's as lovely as it is Brilliant!
Truly amazing!
Note to self: Short can be genius!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
bonzer! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. ;D
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Kay this is exceptional, I love this, says so much in few words and the form is enchanting.
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Perfect!
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
This is your shortest, but BEST poem I have read! This is great stuff Kay.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Dear Kay....I loved this short but powerful write my friend...excellent!!!!
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Dear Tinka....what are you smoking?
(Just joking!)I certainly would never touch either of those two,not in a pink fit they make me nervous,in fact I am hiding under your basket (lose some weight will you ,you're squashing me)don't let on to the other's where I am,there are too may sharks in that ocean and they might just throw me in if they find me (for fun)those two guys are too macho for this little bunny's liking.
You have dug me into a hole tink...get me out of it please or send Ron down here to keep me company....he's cute.(wink wink)
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
...Wow what rythim what rhyme..what light!
Exquisite!


Vesna
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Hey PAL you are a star...kick Ronny...dang... he forgot to put you in the PIC as one of my movie-stars...lol!!
So you are still the shy one...hiding behind that damn basket...get out there and show your face.......lol!!

What did you do to Ted...just before I landed on his lap???? Hmmmmmmmm?????

Why did Morchuis run away?

I wonder???? What he showed or told him???

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Beautiful, so beautifully written!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Jack Roberts
A great little write!

Jack
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Your a star in your own right;-)Lovely poem Kay!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Your a star with in yourself, but reach for another one if you have too.
SMoooooooooo0-0000000-ooooooooo-00000000000CH!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Great write!
Reviewed by Londis Carpenter
I rate this five stars. this is an awesome poem. It has a great message and it is done with such an economy of words. Excellent. thank you. this one goes into my library.
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
I agree with Jay. :) Stardom is way too overrated. Love, Alex
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