|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Dale, your words absolutely move me! I think you have painted a masterpiece yourself here with words. FINE POETRY! Fantastic mind! I enjoyed reading this.
|Reviewed by serenety L
|The painting of love.
Very well written.
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so lovely, very beautifully written, this one just touched my heart tonight,
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|Exquisite portrait of the beginning.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Exquisite, just lovely and compelling poetry.|
|Reviewed by Marlene Dawn
|Great work Dale!
|Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
|wow this is hot.... a real joy to read erotic in form....great write|
|Reviewed by Trixie Love
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|This was just very good...well written Dale!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|The images this paints is nothing short of glorious!Poetry Alive!|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|So vivid in imagery. Speaks aloud the colors of the heart. Lisa|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|CJ ... this is why many love art and the participation in it. It is are giving 'birth' that keeps us writing and painting and singing and dancing. We love the fulfillment of what we do and you did this poem and idea so well. Bill Murray|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|The imagery in this is really quuite breathtaking. Outstanding.
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This is excellent!
"This ancient soul
The power of passion
shining in brilliance
Nothing could be seen
The sun was born
stroked on a canvas
The stars were many suns
sketching life’s journey "