by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
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rising from my body
in nefarious waves--
beseeching my God for
just a hint of relief--
He does not deliver--
seems to alleviate
IT--NO thing seems to work--
i'm tortured on the rack--
with banshee moan, "enough!"--
it doesn't end--o, no--
and then my brain explodes--
although i don't like IT--
IT is a part of me--
i learn to live with IT--
(C) Karla Dorman, 2003
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|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Oh YES, I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL KARLA! And you know I do with all my brain surgeries and shunts and tumors and now tumors in the throat and all. Yes,I know PAIN all too well like you do!
This is a QUALITY Write Karla! Excellent! You have great talent!
|Reviewed by Heather Bricklin (Reader)
|Another truly brilliant write.|
|Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
|I live w/ daily pain as well, so I can understand this|
|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|Gentle Hugs, sorry you have to bare this, I know pain all to well myself...
|Reviewed by Dee C.
|Oh how sad dear one...I know exactly where you are and wish I could take it all away.
Take one day at a time....prayers for you!
|Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
|Ouch... My dearest friend, each line hurts... I so wish that a relief for chronic pain is found soon... and you are so very brave!...
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah Karla, my sister suffers as you do, she even goes to a pain clinic, doesn't help much, I hate to think of you suffering like this, Your courage and strength to endure this is inspiring,
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A mesmerizing Write ! Your faith and courage show though! Kudo's!|
|Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen
|Ouch! I hurt FOR you after reading this, Karla! Hugs!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I don't know your pain, but it must be bad. Hope God will help you. I would help if I could. Do you think the Long Horns are going to beat my Razorbacks tomorrow in Austin? Razorbacks 17 Long Horns 14. GO HOGS!
Love ya karla.........Ron
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Karla I am so sorry....I live with pain too...so I know...you just get so used to it after awhile...and sometimes it can drive you mad...take care ....emotional write here..floria|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Ouch great write!|
|Reviewed by Christine Morell
|Brilliant poem, Karla. I do hope your pain eases for you soon.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hope your pain will stop soon Karla!!
excellent write about your feelings and pain!!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|good description of pain and what it does to a body! like you, i know the enemy intimately. excellent read; enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( *hope you stop hurting soon!* :(|