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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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P.A.I.N.! (Revised)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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i hear
taste
see
smell IT--
rising from my body
in nefarious waves--
demanding--unceasing--
i twist
moan
cry
BEG
beseeching my God for
just a hint of relief--
He does not deliver--
no rest
compress
plaster
pill
seems to alleviate
IT--NO thing seems to work--
i'm tortured on the rack--
i yell
scream
shout
shriek
with banshee moan, "enough!"--
it doesn't end--o, no--
and then my brain explodes--
consumed
ravaged
devoured
exhausted
although i don't like IT--
IT is a part of me--
i learn to live with IT--

P.A.I.N.!

(C) Karla Dorman, 2003



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Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Oh YES, I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL KARLA! And you know I do with all my brain surgeries and shunts and tumors and now tumors in the throat and all. Yes,I know PAIN all too well like you do!

This is a QUALITY Write Karla! Excellent! You have great talent!
Reviewed by Heather Bricklin (Reader)
Another truly brilliant write.
Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
I live w/ daily pain as well, so I can understand this
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
Gentle Hugs, sorry you have to bare this, I know pain all to well myself...
God Bless
~Michelle~
Reviewed by Dee C.
Oh how sad dear one...I know exactly where you are and wish I could take it all away.
Take one day at a time....prayers for you!
~Dee~
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*® Authors & Creations
Ouch... My dearest friend, each line hurts... I so wish that a relief for chronic pain is found soon... and you are so very brave!...
{{{{{{{Karla}}}}}}}}
~Alexandra~
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
Ah Karla, my sister suffers as you do, she even goes to a pain clinic, doesn't help much, I hate to think of you suffering like this, Your courage and strength to endure this is inspiring,

Reindeer
Reviewed by E T Waldron
A mesmerizing Write ! Your faith and courage show though! Kudo's!
Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen
Ouch! I hurt FOR you after reading this, Karla! Hugs!

Julie :)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
I don't know your pain, but it must be bad. Hope God will help you. I would help if I could. Do you think the Long Horns are going to beat my Razorbacks tomorrow in Austin? Razorbacks 17 Long Horns 14. GO HOGS!
Love ya karla.........Ron
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Karla I am so sorry....I live with pain too...so I know...you just get so used to it after awhile...and sometimes it can drive you mad...take care ....emotional write here..floria
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Ouch great write!
Reviewed by Christine Morell
Brilliant poem, Karla. I do hope your pain eases for you soon.
Love
~Chrissie xx
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Hope your pain will stop soon Karla!!
excellent write about your feelings and pain!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
good description of pain and what it does to a body! like you, i know the enemy intimately. excellent read; enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( *hope you stop hurting soon!* :(
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