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by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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i hear
smell IT--
rising from my body
in nefarious waves--
i twist
beseeching my God for
just a hint of relief--
He does not deliver--
no rest
seems to alleviate
IT--NO thing seems to work--
i'm tortured on the rack--
i yell
with banshee moan, "enough!"--
it doesn't end--o, no--
and then my brain explodes--
although i don't like IT--
IT is a part of me--
i learn to live with IT--


(C) Karla Dorman, 2003

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Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang 9/17/2003
Oh YES, I KNOW EXACTLY HOW YOU FEEL KARLA! And you know I do with all my brain surgeries and shunts and tumors and now tumors in the throat and all. Yes,I know PAIN all too well like you do!

This is a QUALITY Write Karla! Excellent! You have great talent!
Reviewed by Heather Bricklin (Reader) 9/14/2003
Another truly brilliant write.
Reviewed by Sarah Tagert 9/13/2003
I live w/ daily pain as well, so I can understand this
Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen 9/13/2003
Gentle Hugs, sorry you have to bare this, I know pain all to well myself...
God Bless
Reviewed by Dee C. 9/12/2003
Oh how sad dear one...I know exactly where you are and wish I could take it all away.
Take one day at a time....prayers for you!
Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight* Authors & Creations 9/12/2003
Ouch... My dearest friend, each line hurts... I so wish that a relief for chronic pain is found soon... and you are so very brave!...
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 9/12/2003
Ah Karla, my sister suffers as you do, she even goes to a pain clinic, doesn't help much, I hate to think of you suffering like this, Your courage and strength to endure this is inspiring,

Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/12/2003
A mesmerizing Write ! Your faith and courage show though! Kudo's!
Reviewed by Julie Donner Andersen 9/12/2003
Ouch! I hurt FOR you after reading this, Karla! Hugs!

Julie :)
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/12/2003
I don't know your pain, but it must be bad. Hope God will help you. I would help if I could. Do you think the Long Horns are going to beat my Razorbacks tomorrow in Austin? Razorbacks 17 Long Horns 14. GO HOGS!
Love ya karla.........Ron
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 9/12/2003
Karla I am so sorry....I live with pain I just get so used to it after awhile...and sometimes it can drive you mad...take care ....emotional write here..floria
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/12/2003
Ouch great write!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 9/12/2003
Brilliant poem, Karla. I do hope your pain eases for you soon.
~Chrissie xx
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/12/2003
Hope your pain will stop soon Karla!!
excellent write about your feelings and pain!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/12/2003
good description of pain and what it does to a body! like you, i know the enemy intimately. excellent read; enjoyed~ (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :( *hope you stop hurting soon!* :(

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