|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
This is very good. I only have one suggestion. Maybe there could be one more stanza. If not, it's yours and it's great.
Love, Mom xoxoxoxo
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Oh now, it will get better. Some of my days everything I touch falls to wherever. I'm always happy to see you writing pretty lady.|
|Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
|feeling the words as I read them... this is a wanting poem....|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Wow!! Powerful write Zing!!
Glad you back!!