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Longing
by jing javier

Friday, September 12, 2003

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...mental maze...

 


hungry longing for acceptance


 


and feeling of worthiness


 


hidden in empty darkness


 


of my weary soul.


 


 


the ultimate goal


 


seems unattainable,


 


as I helplessly fumble


 


and uncontrollably stumble


 


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Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 10/23/2003
Hi Sweets!

This is very good. I only have one suggestion. Maybe there could be one more stanza. If not, it's yours and it's great.

Love, Mom xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/12/2003
Oh now, it will get better. Some of my days everything I touch falls to wherever. I'm always happy to see you writing pretty lady.
Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers 9/12/2003
feeling the words as I read them... this is a wanting poem....
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/12/2003
Wow!! Powerful write Zing!!
Glad you back!!

love Tinka
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