|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|There is no end to your mystery and artistry. Brilliant work.
|Reviewed by Rodney Bohen
Impressed as always.....
Rodney Evan Bohen
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|well done, enjoyed the read|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Incredible write, breathtaking, Melissa.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Excellent poetry Melissa!!
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Your poetry is like a breath of fresh air.....God you're good!
|Reviewed by Aamie Burnley
|... haunting and beautiful. hmmmmm, the apple doesnt fall far from the tree. :)|
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|Zappers!! Straight to the point with this one. The rhythm even took pace with thy sharp tongue.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the shade of darkness in this poem is simply illuminating!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Excellent and extremely well done!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|I agree with Eileen, and it's great reading you again. Have a great tomorrow....|
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Melissa!!!!! Slicing poetry that does things for the senses. Loved the detail... oh, this was spun so well! What a mind! I love the ending. I do so believe in karma. YOU are brilliant!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Melissa, no one can do this genre like you! Fantabulous!|
|Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
|Ouch! Good writing! Scary!
Taking all that is left
... time you’ll never get back.
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Excellent rhyme and meter. Most of all, a painful, powerful write!