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Melissa C. Rives

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Unholy Bonds
by Melissa C. Rives

Sunday, September 14, 2003

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For someone I know...

Hollow heart, empty head
and a promise soon broken…
In fury of fight
daggered words had been spoken.

These cut to the bone
to the center of pain…
For the bliss of a love
many souls have been slain.

Arms that turn up their wrists
for the vein to be severed…
No thoughts for the moment
nor costs to be measured.

A will broke in two
fractured thoughts bled away…
Just a moment when she holds
the powers that sway.

Smiling sweetly with lips
painted red with your life…
With the ring of your soul
she is bound as your wife.

Till the day you awake
under her crude attack…
Taking all that is left
time you’ll never get back.

When her true colors show
when her face is revealed…
You will know it’s the devil
with whom your love’s sealed.



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Reviewed by Amor Sabor 3/18/2007
There is no end to your mystery and artistry. Brilliant work.
Amor
Reviewed by Rodney Bohen 9/23/2003
Melissa,
Impressed as always.....
Rodney Evan Bohen
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 9/21/2003
well done, enjoyed the read
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 9/16/2003
Incredible write, breathtaking, Melissa.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/15/2003
Excellent poetry Melissa!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 9/15/2003
Your poetry is like a breath of fresh air.....God you're good!

Thanks Sis!....Dani
Reviewed by Aamie Burnley 9/15/2003
... haunting and beautiful. hmmmmm, the apple doesnt fall far from the tree. :)
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 9/15/2003
Zappers!! Straight to the point with this one. The rhythm even took pace with thy sharp tongue.

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 9/14/2003
Excellent poetry....BHUWAN
Reviewed by jude forese 9/14/2003
the shade of darkness in this poem is simply illuminating!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 9/14/2003
Excellent and extremely well done!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/14/2003
I agree with Eileen, and it's great reading you again. Have a great tomorrow....
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 9/14/2003
Melissa!!!!! Slicing poetry that does things for the senses. Loved the detail... oh, this was spun so well! What a mind! I love the ending. I do so believe in karma. YOU are brilliant!

Thank you,
Emilie
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/14/2003
Melissa, no one can do this genre like you! Fantabulous!
Reviewed by Jimmy Holder 9/14/2003
Ouch! Good writing! Scary!
...
Taking all that is left
... time you’ll never get back.
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 9/14/2003
Melissa,

Excellent rhyme and meter. Most of all, a painful, powerful write!

Tami
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