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Creation
by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Monday, September 15, 2003

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*Dark Poetry*



In a place without honor and everlasting sin,
We created a world to live in,
You and I...
Where you sought to give me a reason,
To stop wanting to die.

Dark Knight and his Red Queen...
Living a life few have ever seen,
He walks through the world like a king-
This gladiator who fights his battles in the ring...

And I,
I merely hold the crown...

I wish I could have realized,
Before it was all said and done,
The thing we gave birth to,
Would also be Your Son...

I Tried!
I tried to shape him,
I tried to mold him to my soul,
Dear God,
How was I too know-
The Evil in you would show...
Would manifest itself in everything you touched,
Even me-

Why couldn't I see...

His beauty would be fleeting,
His wholeness uncentered-
His soul cracked and bleeding,
Your black blood flowing in his veins...
I should have remembered,
In hell it never rains-

There would be no way to wash him clean,
Rinse the blood from his hands,
Find a pool of clear, clean water,
Baptize him...Save him from his father!

This child with an evil grin,
Smiles at me...Stares at him-
Has my heart, but his Daddy's soul,
I wish I had known,
What it was I was thinking,
When I dared to give birth...
Gave you progeny,
To spread among the Earth...


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Reviewed by Jim Dunlap 9/30/2003
Yes, memorable writing. "In Hell it never rains" is a gem. Unsettling poem. I
hope it is not autobiographical.
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 9/19/2003
Outstanding work, and awesome truly awesome dark poetry...now can you please help me chase these goose pimleys away??? :O)
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Jimmy Holder 9/16/2003
WoW - my skin is tingling!
Outstanding writing!
....
I should have remembered,
In hell it never rains-

Reviewed by Nancy D. 9/15/2003
Such a chilling write.

Nancy
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 9/15/2003
The depth you must have had to reach for this is heart wrenching. (((((Reindeer)))))

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 9/15/2003
Ah, Reindeer, you're a master of this genre! You make one feel your pain and fear. Well done, well done!!!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 9/15/2003
Oh what creation grows, from the devil's seed.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/15/2003
Deep chilling write.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 9/15/2003
Reindeer....oh so powerful and deep this is...I must go read it again..I think I might not have taken it all in with the first read...this is one to read slowly and savor...great write...floria
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/15/2003
Reindeer, you stunned me,I'm speechless with this one!It reeks with the stench of stygian places while it is so beautifully written.Such a dichotomy;-)Superb!
Reviewed by Sandra Corona 9/15/2003
One never knows the complete results of anything. Thought-provoking!
:)Sandy
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 9/15/2003
This gave me chills! Powerful write, Retta.
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 9/15/2003
Yowsa! What a powerful write! Deep in thoughts and meaning and touching. Outstanding job!

Tami
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/15/2003
DANG!!! This hits home BIG TIME!!
Like father like son!!

Tried!
I tried to shape him,
I tried to mold him to my soul,
Dear God,
How was I too know-
The Evil in you would show...
Would manifest itself in everything you touched,
Even me-

This really made me sad!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/15/2003
Stunning! Hugs!
Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell 9/15/2003
This is chilling...but very well composed and holding a dark message.....
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 9/15/2003
WOW! This is oooooooooooooooh...um chilling. You rock the house with this! Your voice and creative little pen----thank you for treating us today!

Teresa Emilie
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 9/15/2003
Wow!
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