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Caribbean Flavor...(Haiku)
by Jenni Kalicharan

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Hey, this is my first attempt at Haiku...so please be gentle.


~~xXx~~


Cool Caribbean breeze


Softly whispering your name


Intoxicating.


~~xXx~~


 


 


 


 



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Reviewed by Lois Christensen 7/26/2008
Great, the blue sea calls out to me to come see it? It is so neat a scene you present here.
Reviewed by john zimmerman 9/21/2003
jenni,
'bout time you took up haiku! ;0

you did a good job

john+
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 9/20/2003
Jenni I have loved these lil gems of tropical flavor!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Christine Morell 9/16/2003
Gorgeous. An excellent first attempt Jenni
Love
~Chrissie
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 9/16/2003
What a lovely Haiku! Beautifully written,

Reindeer
Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa 9/16/2003
What a profound truth... the Cool Caribbean breeze has been softly whispering my name for a long time, but my pocket has remained empty for too long for me to answer the call. Thanks for these beautiful lines.



Intoxicating.
Reviewed by Patricia Gomes 9/16/2003
Perfect form! And a lovely place to write of.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/16/2003
heyyyy!!! nice haiku, jenni; great job! :D wonderful pic, too; would love to visit the caribbean, but don't have the bucks....oh, well, i can DREAM, can't i? LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) 9/16/2003
great poem
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 9/16/2003
An excellent first haiku...and love the picture.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 9/16/2003
wow...superb write with wonderful picture...thank u....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 9/16/2003
I am dumb at this,tried once with help of lovely soul but am too chicken to try again,yours is so cool!Good on ya Jenni old mate!
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 9/15/2003
great haiku Jenni, I especially like it because it's understandable. to much of the haiku I read is difficult to understand.
peace
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/15/2003
With the ocean hand in hand
Always SUPERB in my eyes!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 9/15/2003
This is excellent... especially for a first attempt. It swept me away.

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl 9/15/2003
Oh so soothing....romantic.
~Kerry
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/15/2003
Wonderful and love the pic too!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/15/2003
A place I would love to visit. Great Haiku!

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