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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/26/2008 |
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| Great, the blue sea calls out to me to come see it? It is so neat a scene you present here. |
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| Reviewed by john zimmerman |
9/21/2003 |
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jenni,
'bout time you took up haiku! ;0
you did a good job
john+ |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
9/20/2003 |
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Jenni I have loved these lil gems of tropical flavor!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
9/16/2003 |
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Gorgeous. An excellent first attempt Jenni
Love
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
9/16/2003 |
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What a lovely Haiku! Beautifully written,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by George MacLean Akurunwa |
9/16/2003 |
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What a profound truth... the Cool Caribbean breeze has been softly whispering my name for a long time, but my pocket has remained empty for too long for me to answer the call. Thanks for these beautiful lines.
Intoxicating.
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| Reviewed by Patricia Gomes |
9/16/2003 |
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| Perfect form! And a lovely place to write of. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
9/16/2003 |
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| heyyyy!!! nice haiku, jenni; great job! :D wonderful pic, too; would love to visit the caribbean, but don't have the bucks....oh, well, i can DREAM, can't i? LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
9/16/2003 |
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| great poem |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
9/16/2003 |
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| An excellent first haiku...and love the picture. |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
9/16/2003 |
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| wow...superb write with wonderful picture...thank u....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
9/16/2003 |
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| I am dumb at this,tried once with help of lovely soul but am too chicken to try again,yours is so cool!Good on ya Jenni old mate! |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
9/15/2003 |
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great haiku Jenni, I especially like it because it's understandable. to much of the haiku I read is difficult to understand.
peace |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/15/2003 |
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With the ocean hand in hand
Always SUPERB in my eyes!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
9/15/2003 |
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This is excellent... especially for a first attempt. It swept me away.
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl |
9/15/2003 |
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Oh so soothing....romantic.
~Kerry |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/15/2003 |
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| Wonderful and love the pic too! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/15/2003 |
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| A place I would love to visit. Great Haiku! |
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