AuthorsDen.com   Join (Free!) | Login  

     Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
   Services MarketPlace (Free to post!)
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    eBOOKS new!     BOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    EVENTS    VIDEOS    GOLD    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Betty Jo Tucker, iByron Edgington, iShirley Woods, iHenry Miranda, iElizabeth Weeks-Rowe, iCarolyn Matherne, iGracie McKeever, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Kay P M- Devenish

· Become a Fan
· Contact me
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 167 Titles
· 2,578 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Jun, 2002

Kay P M- Devenish, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.


Popular Poetry (Poetry)
  1.  imaginable possibility
  2.  The Fighter
  3.  Bedlam in Thibodaux
  4.  I'll Be Doing It Until I Die
  5.  synchronized
  6.  The Garden of Death
  7.  A Woman
  8.  Shoes
  9.  I Sprung
  10.  fusion of muse
  11.  The Domino Effect
  12.  ISIS, et al
  13.  Ahhh . . . Thinking About Things
  14.  Fifty Bales of Hay....
  15.  sky of reason
  16.  Wolf at the Door
  17.  A Few Words About You
  18.  Wind
  19.  Speachless
  20.  Catch A Thought



Leland's challenge...(finally submitted here).
by Kay P M- Devenish

Wednesday, September 17, 2003

Share   Print  Save   Become a Fan

Recent poems by Kay P M- Devenish
•  Skeletons in a closet.
•  Human Monsters!
•  The kidnapped Toad
•  The refugee on my train.
•  repost...I don't want to go there
           >> View all 161

 

 

I must compose myself to compose

Leland's challenge ,

(it may end up like manuer,

get ready to hold nose!)


I cannot bear to strip you bare
and see you swim the sea
the shellfish know I told you 'no'
'it's never done in its nudie.'

A principal should wear
his full uniform to swim
in principle ,the fish don't wish naked humans in.
And  uniform waves don't crave
your bouncing blubber there
their must be some decorum in this forum that we share.
(Don't blubber about it! and don't lose your head! then you'll get ahead....)
Why don't you buy a share in a swimming pool instead
then I will say 'bye' to clothes and in good stead ,I'll  shed.
Hide your eye though as I slip my slip from off my hide,
We will sneak into the shed and snuggle in that dive.
we'll live our lives and feel so live
we'll splash and paddle , swim and dive.
an hour will be such fun
and I will put you in my will
if  ever I get one....'cause,you're the one.
You will get a tidy sum,you'll  feel like you've won,

(it's all in a good cause....your cause!).
 
some may say that we 'are rude!'
but in May  they will find us  nude.
a Human being.... just being nude
tell me now...
how is that  rude?
 I take a bow and tie my bow...

now I have to go!

ooopppsss....just rememebered ,the tie is all I am wearing!!!!)This is challenge is wearing me out!

Did I tie with anyone leland?
Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!


Reviewed by Jimmy Holder 9/19/2003
Amazing use of some VERY difficult words. Well done!
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 9/18/2003
You my lady are brilliant and met this challenge hands down. Excellent!!!!
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 9/18/2003
Now this is brilliant!
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 9/18/2003
Neat, Kay, well done.
Bobbi
Reviewed by Sharon Williamson (Reader) 9/17/2003
Kay, as always I enjoyed this work. you are an awesome poet...and poerson.
Sharon;)
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 9/17/2003
This was excellent Kay, A fun read and an excellent response to his challenge!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/17/2003
Hee, hee, I loved it. Lot of work?
SMooooooooooooo0000000000CH!
Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield 9/17/2003
This is very interesting in deed. Thanks for sharing it!
- J -
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/17/2003
Kudo's for Kay! Great response to the challenge, met and surpassed!
Reviewed by Christine Morell 9/17/2003
Excellent Kay!
Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers 9/17/2003
well done for sure
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/17/2003
This was written after your balloon ride...toooo much fresh air!! Now your brain is clear!!

Very well written!!

love TINKY!!
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 9/17/2003
Bravo kay,
i love the red words in this and the others..... Good meet for the challenge.
PJ
Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.