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  effervescence
by Debby J Rosenberg
Friday, September 19, 2003


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rubbing my toes
cursing high heels
who invented these things
the beautiful elegance
to shapley legs

probably some man
that didn't have to wear them
that didn't learn
the awkward yet graceful
art of balance
not knowing they'd get
caught in cracks
and elevator platforms
or fall through holes
on grated walkways
the annoying snap
when the heels break off
the clicky clack
when the tread is worn

rubbing my toes
thinking if I
was really spoiled
I'd soak my feet
in a bottle of Champaign
and giggle with its
effervescence





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Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 9/23/2003
now my wife needs to read this. of course she's doing better. she tries to squeeze her 9.5's into a 9. then come the pain. enjoyed this. G
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 9/23/2003
I hate wearing any shoes.....lol

Oh no! I tell a lie...Coz I do LOVE my Ugg Boots. ;)

Loved this poem and what a great pic.....thanks for the grin.....Dani
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 9/21/2003
Excellance to a "T"! Yes, it probably was a man who thought of high heels! :O)
~Nikki~
P.S. Ha ha ha just having a good chuckle trying to imagine a man walking in those heels!
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson 9/21/2003
loved this and think i will try it me "self"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/20/2003
Oh I hate those heels....thats why I love my beach,,,barefoot stays the best!!

Even with cracked heels!!

I think we must invent a "Underwire lifter for them "Tools"...I mean toes!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/20/2003
Probably the same man that invented the bra we really didn't need. Great write!
Reviewed by jude forese 9/20/2003
at that pointk, it would be nice for that man to suck those toes...
Reviewed by ira eden 9/19/2003
bless your honest voice on the everyday art of the real world!

*
eden
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 9/19/2003
No doubt that man was a sadist!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/19/2003
How delightful is that last verse!;'-) A perfect finale to the crazy high heel saga!I loved them as a teen,hate them now and never wear them ;-)great write!

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