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lack
by ira eden
Friday, September 19, 2003

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so
i painted this beautiful picture
of inspiration and creativity
every detail so intricate, too intricate
too surreal my beautiful picture
this
life of happiness and trust
never doubting stupidly never
doubting
honestly never
questioning the lines
but
i forgot the shaded gray
and the gray was overpowering
and the gray was composed of lack
lack of trust and lack of
the ability to truly love
to freely give honestly
and
my beautiful little picture
framed with such passion
and such purity never guessed
the reality within its lines
the falsity that it was hiding
yes
i painted a beautiful picture
so so delicate and sweet this picture
shaded and false this picture
now
that i see between its lines

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Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 9/21/2003
So sad, yet insightful and wise...very fine work!
~Nikki~
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/21/2003
Very insightful and well delivered! poetry that provokes one to think is what it's all about;-)!
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/21/2003
Most interesting read!!

Tinka
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 9/20/2003
Ira, music is the greatest passion of my life. come sing me a song? ok? Bill Murray.
Maybe you can even sing one of mine. Do you like a little country? Bill
Reviewed by Brenda Ross (Reader) 9/20/2003
How sad that most of us fail to read between the lines. I love this poem.
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 9/19/2003
Makes want to grab a paint brush. Nicely done!
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