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Beat between North Beach and Haight Ashbury
by Tyler Joseph Wiseman
Saturday, September 20, 2003
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Published in April 2005 Poetic Voices |
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Amidst the fervor of fog, a silent appeal
in the lighthouses ghostly tendril
beckoned me to the shore
of which I could not be certain
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I was marrow damp, chilled
by masses flitting in an instant
before they were gone the next,
specters dead from too much life
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The martini signs which characterized
all of the debaucheries opulence
shone a distilled red, clinging to the night
like it was some drunkard's gut
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I died in the similes of the valley, years back
and the metaphors of the beach, they beat me
until I could only seek respite in the concrete shoal
of San Francisco, Pier 39 to Golden Gate
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Everything else was abhorrent to my soles,
the foot beat excruciating, the junkies and queers,
an evolutionary leap from Burrough's legacy
Ginsberg is now juxtaposed
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Go to NYC, but not so long it makes you soft
and go to 'frisco, though not so long it makes you cold
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/27/2005 |
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| A compelling poetic offering, Tyler. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
9/23/2003 |
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I was marrow damp, chilled
by masses flitting in an instant
before they were gone the next,
specters dead from too much life
good write mate....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
9/22/2003 |
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Intriguing, interesting and the words no matter how simple or common so full of depth and feeling...love this one Tyler!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
9/20/2003 |
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..ahhh Tyler..you never cease to amaze and delight me..beautiful work..as always!...ty
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
9/20/2003 |
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This write draws the mind in deeper. Well done with words that intrigue.
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
9/20/2003 |
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Excellent, Tyler.
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
9/20/2003 |
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Wonderfully-written, Tyler! I like your choice of words.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o) |
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