A BetterBlow
by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
Saturday, September 20, 2003
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Never say die, maybe cry, but never say die, never, never, ever. |
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Cut all the pork out,
this is what it's truly all about.
Just to have a good day, today, my own way, in an enjoyable way, what more can I say, one day at a time, no crime, I no seek out destiny anyway, destiny may be last day, the end, an end I can't mend, goal wiser, goal I direct, correct, perfect.
A better blow, not with hammer,
no locomotive, not with bat, just a good feeling,
one more thrilling.
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| Reviewed by Damian Kuthalane |
8/30/2009 |
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| one thing about this poem is I like the style man... and if you live by this poem, then you must be a cool person to get to know.... cheers brother, good one! |
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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
8/27/2008 |
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| I can dig this one! So cool and laid back, your style is like that here, with a very good messege. Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed |
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| Reviewed by Johnny Smith |
8/12/2007 |
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| Can I ask, with all-due respect, why you have this listed under fantasy? |
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| Reviewed by Brenda Ross (Reader) |
9/20/2003 |
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| I like the attitude underlining this poem. I have never seen any useful purpose served by anticipating troubles. I know I will eventually die, but I prefer not to do so more than once so I will wait until the time comes and deal with it then. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/20/2003 |
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| Words of wisdom Grady!! |
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