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He Said
by Mitzi Kay Jackson

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My piece to add in the struggles of domestic voilence To Mrs. Linda Hill and others...with all the information there is still a long hard fight to come


He Said.....

If I can't help you
I won't hurt you
If I can't help you
I'll leave you alone
I'll leave
you alone
alone....I won't hurt
I won't hurt you
I won't
hurt you
I'll leave
I leave you alone
alone I
won't hurt you
you hurt you
I hurt damn it!
hurt you
Damn baby I'm sorry I hurt you
I never meant to hurt you
I'm sorry
never meant
to hurt you
sorry...stupid bitch
you stupid bitch
you can't be helped
you can't be
no one can help you
no one
can help

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Reviewed by x x (Reader)
Mitzi Kay you write with a lot of gut! Awesome! :-)
Reviewed by richard poor
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Poignant and powerful and unfortunately so true. Take care, Mitzi.
Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
Girl, it's a damn nice piece... Congrats...
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
powerful read
Reviewed by E. Richardson
Oh my...this is strong....stark, raw emotion in single words or short bursts like punches and slaps...this is exceptional, Mitzi
Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle
Jesus, this is powerful. It's also how i tend to write sometimes, with the parsing of sentences. It makes me want to write one of my own. you must read my poem called- how to make a man-ok?
Reviewed by Dwayne Breeden (Reader)
Wow Mitzi! You and your messages are still intense! Keep up the hard work, each day it only gets better!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
He Said She Said Now If Only Both Of You Would Do Something About It Instead Of (Cheap)Talk!

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
the emotion here hit me, a haunting expression from "he said"
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Powerful write...BHUWAN
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
Truly powerful write about a cycle that repeats itself time and time again. Lovely reading you again, my friend. Trish.
Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Powerful write indeed, Mitzi! I'm happy to see you here.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Cha Ching Bling Bling...excellant and powerful delivery...Thank You Mitzi!!!!
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Mitzi, only you can do it with such force and intensity, excellent write for the subject!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Hits full force. Great write!
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Why is it women are attracted to abusive men, and then sucked into a cycle of abuse and violence? It must be genetic. Reasoning people wouldn't do it.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
So Powerful, I felt every word, you said it all right here..

Reviewed by Jimmy Holder
Sad situation. I don't know domestic violence - guess i was just lucky, but I have prayers for those who do!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
A common cycle. They love them, but then they hurt them.
Glad to read you again Mitzi...
Have a great day!
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

*cringe* i felt the anger and betrayal in this strong, realistic, dramatic piece *tears*
powerful, powerful write--to anyone in this situation, GET OUT before it's too late

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :(
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