|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Susan, I am in awe of such a waterfall, such an explosion of emotion and sensation! It takes real courage to be this nakedly expressive! Wonderful, wonderful write!
|Reviewed by Marco Landi
|well done Susan...great moments are here..|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|A lovely tribute filled with some advice!
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
|So many great lines her but this one I liked the most.
"Your hands are an easy comfort
Your smile is even more
Your voice gives me shivers
My feet won't touch the floor"
|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most excellent Susan!!
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Susan, excellent poem. Love, passion and life is only as good as what we put into it.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Susan....great poem from you yet again....I can relate this...excellent....love n luck...BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
|I, also, love the passage Marilyn picked out, something primal in its essence. Lovely piece, Susan! :)|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was very lovely, flowed so well and beautifully written!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|At first I thought of Tina Turner's intro to Proud Mary, and then you pulled off a nice and easy little piece. Wanted to change one word, ... Did you know that I'm your garden?
Just waiting for your care? (till?) Well better quit poking around.
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|" love you nice n' easy
Pure sugar, raw-uncured
As natural as the air I breath
Dedicated and matured"
WOW! what poetry. Outstanding!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)