|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|Wonderful questions... wonderful write.
|Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
|This was a masterful work indeed, mixing a comprehensive view of the inner turmoils in a palpable language, with fine subtleties of rime, and good form.
Salutations on a keen write.
|Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
|FANTASTIC WRITE, ERIN!!! Love this poem! The alternate voices, like a Greek Choir from the Subconscious, as the Conscious Mind sadly ruminates on the Whys and Wherefores... dramatic conterpoints! Be proud of this one!|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
go ahead and cry--like writing, it's a healing process
powerful, heartfelt write!
(((HUGS))) and hope you feel better soon
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Sometimes its hard to cry but crying is a sense of healing, great write.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Great questions! Laugh until you cry.
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|This is fantastic. Humanity..a combulaged thang.!|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|This one is gripping write my friend....excellent!!!!|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|Erin I have wept and I still weep. Your poem speaks, maybe you need to read mine again. I'm no hero, I made this perfectly clear, I live in fear but I don't let fear rule me. As far as horses are concerned, I hate riding horses, I'm not going to get on one to fall off. I did ride motorcycles, I fail off and have never been back on one, so you see I understand. I'll be with you recording the other hero's. G|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Weep get it out of your system Methinks!!
Look who gives advice...oH MY!!
Am I feeling better or what??
|Reviewed by Brenda Ross (Reader)
|To weep is often to heal. I have a tendency to use laughter as a shield against serious realities and, despite popular opinion, this is not necessarily a healthy attitude|
|Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
|Weep not, but laugh at humanity!
Nice poem, Eric!
Bye for now,
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
|Never weep over wanting to better and strengthen your self. Nice write!|
|Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme
|Yes - we should all despair the losing of our sensitivity. We should all weep.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Beautiful Erin....simply beautiful..yes I weep a lot..it relieves all the anxiety of life...I love this...floria|
|Reviewed by Vicky Jeter
For me, I do weep. My experience is that
these exquisite paradoxes articulated take the very essence of experience from each other. Thus the holographic universe. Vicky
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Weep and we will weep with you. Or at least I will...you always stir the emotions that need stirring!Excellent write!|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Erin, how touching, I feel your pain, your tears and believe in your healing. With each and every poem you write, you seem to healing the self from whatever malady you suffer from...Thank you for the beauty of this one, ED|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|"Do I Weep?" - Yes You should when You feel it is coming out.
This is a masterpiece... A real gold nugget of twenty-two ounces!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Some interesting questions...
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)