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Not free
by Vesna * Vanessa
Wednesday, September 24, 2003

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It is time to accept the inevitable...yet in alternate worlds we'll meet....

I cannot sleep
I lie awake
alone I weep
awaiting daybreak

a whisper ceaseless
assaults my ear
as life's briefness
becomes so clear

you moulded my dreams
and entered within
you listened to screams
that came from sin

you drift in my thoughts
reflecting the sun
your lie distorts
the luminous one

forgive me you say
tears in your eyes
you are my day
as the night hides

through thick and thin
we shall endure
but we cannot win
love to ensure

you are not free
and neither am I
cannot you see
this love must die

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Reviewed by Lois Christensen 5/15/2008
It's attraction, not love, going on in your heart. He is taken and you know right from wrong and would not take him away from another.
Reviewed by Russ Okamura 9/30/2003
A very intellegent and deeply profound poem. Very awesome work.
Reviewed by Dale Clark 9/25/2003
Truly a gem and so sad yet beautiful!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 9/25/2003
Your work is awesome!! ty, Dani
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero 9/25/2003
Your expression has strength. This is a very painful moment, and your writing is so courageous. Thank you for sharing this one.

Reviewed by Jackie Brooks 9/25/2003
A lot of heartache in this one. Jackie <> <
Reviewed by L M (Reader) 9/24/2003
So much pain in this one.
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 9/24/2003
Sorrowful in it's longing
Reviewed by Christine Morell 9/24/2003
An absolutely beautiful, heartfelt poem and one for my library
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/24/2003
Deep...very deep heartbreaking write Vesna!!

love Tinka
Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon 9/24/2003
Oh how sad! I can empathize. ;) Silver

PS: Thank you for the comment on "My Romance". It was written from true life (not an episode of "One Life to Live" LOL. I will work on a sequel for you. ;)
Reviewed by Trixie Love 9/24/2003
Vesna, Such a deep
heartfelt write...
Sooo sad, yet, so beautiful.

Trixie :)
Reviewed by John Bidwell 9/24/2003
I may spend a life time trying not to relate to this. It won't work.
I relate.
Well done indeed.
Reviewed by Paul Berube 9/24/2003
Vesna, excellent work and pure beauty.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/24/2003
Deeply felt heartache in this Vesna, a beautiful sad poem,also love the art you choose;-)
Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield 9/24/2003
Vesna, this is excellent! Sad, but I really like the way it smooth and flowing. Great job!
- J -
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/24/2003
heartbreaking write, vesna; thanks for sharing! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in america, karen lynn. >tears <
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