|Reviewed by Michael Gibbs
|Nancy, methinks you saw such a scene in real life. Well stated.|
|Reviewed by The Voice (Reader)
|Great write. This is difficult for me as I have lost a close friend this way.
|Reviewed by M Flack
|Those we love the dearest are the ones we first look for amongst the tragic carnage and victims of life...
Well written and the imagery very strong...
|Reviewed by Rodd Jokre
|Wow... hit kinda hard... Not really expecting... Rollercoaster work... Thanks for sharing...|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o(
|Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|....this is so sad..here in Croatia the young kids all ahve scooters and I always fear for them..my boys had them when they were in their teens..than God it si over...great write,
|Reviewed by David Mohd
|Nancy,this is so touching and caring....all he best.
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|This is so sad Nancy...my son in law has a motorcycle and I fear them...sad write...floria|
|Reviewed by Russ Okamura
|A very profound poem that makes the readers stop, and think about life. Most excellent!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|This was so moving, so touching, I felt this so deeply tonight, very sad,
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You capture the sudden end of life here for two of us.|
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|It's always sad to encounter the end of someone's life. Good work.|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|So sad, I had an accident myself, quit
riding over it. I was lucky and not hurt
too bad. I've witnessed death on the
highway also. It's horrific. You've
captured the feelig.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|The day after I was married, we witnessed a motorbike accident while driving to my parents to get my stuff. I'll never forget the doll like appearance as the body flipped in the air and the leg twisted in such an odd way. First omen the marriage was in trouble. Wonderful write for this type of cxperience.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
|Its so hard to pass such scenes. I remember working in the ER when I as doing my Nurses Practicum.. Motorcycle accidents are so hard to see.. not that any accident is easy.. but.. *sigh*|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Yesterday, a guy on a motocycle pulled out in front of me without even looking. Almost hit him. I know the feelings of seeing dead folks on the road...Thanks for sharing.|
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
|This is tragic .|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|I know this all to well....scary thought!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Very stark and deeply felt, I know when you see something like this it will haunt you for a time. You chose what's best, prayer.|
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
|Caught the moment well. Sad.|
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Tragic, that is why I quit riding one. You are a sitting duck.|