|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Beautifully put, "oh to be safe from this bondage to love"
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|I agree that this is a poem that actually says something. These wise words give the young a glimpse of what it feels like to get old. Thank you for sharing.
May The Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
|Reviewed by Barry Yelton (Reader)
A poem that actually says something, unlike so many here. I am of an age to appreciate that "dullness like opium" phrase. Well done.
|Reviewed by J. Pajot
|Beautifully expressed! Passion is such a double edged sword...sometimes it is easy to long for the numbness of nothingness...and yet?
All the best this life can offer you, dear lady,
|Reviewed by Chuck Keller
|Love and passion are the life blood. Without them, where would we be?
Another GREAT poem.
|Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl
|There is a great beauty in these words of sadness. Well done.|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is sad but there is a universal truth expressed within your verses, Gloria. Thank you. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Hanley Harding
What a sad poem... but so well done! Excellent.
May I recommend my "Crystal Dreams" and "He Spoke of Leila Rose"?
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Wow this is the first time I have read your work but do not think it will be the last. This is a powerful and all too true work of passion and the troubles and pain it can put us through.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|ah, the opiate of the gods... great write!|
|Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
|Wonderfully expressed and penned Gloria!
|Reviewed by Gary Gebert
|I walk along with you down this path.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
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|Pure poetry......ty, Dani|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|"unfertile land of old age."
I am not yet old...but have seen many older people as passionately in love as those in their twenties...for their is no "aging" in amorous hearts, Gloria.
Your poem is lovely. I enjoyed it much!
|Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
|great poem gloria|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor