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If I fill
The sky
Of your heart
With the
Stars of my love

Will you fill?
The garden
Of my heart
With the
Roses of your love


If I fill
The vacuum
Of your life
With my
Compressed love

Will you fill?
The fissure
Of my life
With your
Fathomless love


If I grasp
The rainbow
From the sky
And bind you
With its bond

Will you bind me?
With the
Of your
Cherubic Love


If I caress
The core
Of your soul
With my

Will you embrace me?
With the
Silken fondle
Of your


If I whisper
In your ears
The mantra
Of my
True love for you

Will you dance?
To its tune
And whisper back
Your mantra
Of true love for me


If I love you
Any reason
But for the
Sake of love only

Will you love me?
Just the way
I love you
And forever put me
In the pupil of your eyes


If I leave
All for you
And surrender
To you

Will you exchange?
To me
And be all
To me

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
You need to write romance novels! Your poetry tells of a good novel! brilliant!

Teresa Emilie
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
If I... was asked those same questions, the answer would be yes yes yes, and yes again to a fantastic write. Your inquiring mind of a woman is unique and beautiful TY Bhuwan
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
This is one of your bests!
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
(((Bhuwan))) This is absolutely beautiful. Fantastic form and flow. One of your best!!

Reviewed by Trixie Love
All that I can say
is WOW!!!
This is beautiful...

Your friend,
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Yes, yes, yes! (Sigh) Wonderful words, Bhuwan! I really loved:
"If I caress
The core
Of your soul
With my

Will you embrace me?
With the
Silken fondle
Of your
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
Beautiful verses of love and
honesty of heart.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*
Stunning verses Bhuwan!

Reviewed by Digital Fairy
Man... every time I stop to read your work I am taken away by how beautifully you paint the wonders of love...That was an AWESOME picture!

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

What a delightful gem this is! Written clearly from the deepest chamber of your heart. Absolutely beautiful!

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Bhuwan....what can I say....I love this...and the picture is perfect for it....floria
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Bhuwan, this is remarkably beautiful. Got lost in this. So I read my way out. Great write,,I agree with Ted. Lisa
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
So lovely Bhuwan, so very moving, I loved this poem,

Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay
Profound Poetry!
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
If you don't become famous, none of us will.
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan
Lovely as always....:>)
Reviewed by Tarek Hassan
Dear Friend,
What a wonderful sublime pact of love. I pray it is possible in human life embedded as it is in drama, change and unpredictability. Unless perhaps you lead us all to the sublime center where the laws of change and of drama are transcended.

Tarek Ali Hassan
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
This is stunning , beautiful
"If I love you
Any reason
But for the
Sake of love only

Will you love me?
Just the way
I love you
And forever put me
In the pupil of your eyes "
Excellent poet... Hugs and love and peace
Lady peg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

If My Man asked me answer would be doubt about that!!

But now he did not I will stick to you and your beautiful Poetry...and dream on!!

Hope I will get "My Ocean to Pop" to Me!!

Or Me to Him....aaaaagh what ever...hehehe!!

Beautiful magic write Bhuwan!!

A keeper!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese
beautiful poem requesting truth and honesty from a most dear realtionship...
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Oh Bhuwan, Such beautiful requests and offerings should be wed;-)!I hope you find it! If you do please let us know it's possible, and not just a dream;-)!

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