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If I
by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Thursday, September 25, 2003

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If I fill
The sky
Of your heart
With the
Stars of my love

Will you fill?
The garden
Of my heart
With the
Roses of your love

~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~

If I fill
The vacuum
Of your life
With my
Compressed love

Will you fill?
The fissure
Of my life
With your
Fathomless love

~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~

If I grasp
The rainbow
From the sky
And bind you
With its bond

Will you bind me?
With the
Garland
Of your
Cherubic Love

~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~

If I caress
The core
Of your soul
With my
Fidelity

Will you embrace me?
With the
Silken fondle
Of your
Trust

~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~

If I whisper
In your ears
The mantra
Of my
True love for you

Will you dance?
To its tune
And whisper back
Your mantra
Of true love for me

~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~

If I love you
Without
Any reason
But for the
Sake of love only

Will you love me?
Just the way
I love you
And forever put me
In the pupil of your eyes

~~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~

If I leave
All for you
And surrender
Myself
To you

Will you exchange?
Yourself
To me
And be all
To me


Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya


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Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 9/28/2003
You need to write romance novels! Your poetry tells of a good novel! Outstanding....no--just brilliant!

Thanks,
Teresa Emilie
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot 9/28/2003
If I... was asked those same questions, the answer would be yes yes yes, and yes again to a fantastic write. Your inquiring mind of a woman is unique and beautiful TY Bhuwan
Blessings
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/27/2003
This is one of your bests!
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 9/27/2003
(((Bhuwan))) This is absolutely beautiful. Fantastic form and flow. One of your best!!

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Trixie Love 9/26/2003
Bhwan,
All that I can say
is WOW!!!
This is beautiful...

Your friend,
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 9/26/2003
Yes, yes, yes! (Sigh) Wonderful words, Bhuwan! I really loved:
"If I caress
The core
Of your soul
With my
Fidelity

Will you embrace me?
With the
Silken fondle
Of your
Trust"
Great!
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) 9/26/2003
Beautiful verses of love and
honesty of heart.
Taylor
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® 9/26/2003
Stunning verses Bhuwan!

~Joseph
Reviewed by Digital Fairy 9/26/2003
Man... every time I stop to read your work I am taken away by how beautifully you paint the wonders of love...That was an AWESOME picture!

--Karissa
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 9/26/2003
Bhuwan,

What a delightful gem this is! Written clearly from the deepest chamber of your heart. Absolutely beautiful!

Tami
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 9/26/2003
Bhuwan....what can I say....I love this...and the picture is perfect for it....floria
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 9/26/2003
Bhuwan, this is remarkably beautiful. Got lost in this. So I read my way out. Great write,,I agree with Ted. Lisa
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 9/26/2003
So lovely Bhuwan, so very moving, I loved this poem,

Reindeer
Reviewed by Esra Karatash Alpay 9/26/2003
Profound Poetry!
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 9/26/2003
If you don't become famous, none of us will.
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 9/26/2003
Lovely as always....:>)
Jenni
Reviewed by Tarek Hassan 9/26/2003
Dear Friend,
What a wonderful sublime pact of love. I pray it is possible in human life embedded as it is in drama, change and unpredictability. Unless perhaps you lead us all to the sublime center where the laws of change and of drama are transcended.

Tarek Ali Hassan
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 9/26/2003
{{{Bhuwan}}}}
This is stunning , beautiful
"If I love you
Without
Any reason
But for the
Sake of love only

Will you love me?
Just the way
I love you
And forever put me
In the pupil of your eyes "
Excellent poet... Hugs and love and peace
Lady peg

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/25/2003
Yes!!

If My Man asked me this...my answer would be yes....no doubt about that!!

But now he did not yet....so I will stick to you and your beautiful Poetry...and dream on!!

Hope I will get "My Ocean to Pop" to Me!!

Or Me to Him....aaaaagh what ever...hehehe!!

Beautiful magic write Bhuwan!!

A keeper!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese 9/25/2003
beautiful poem requesting truth and honesty from a most dear realtionship...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/25/2003
Oh Bhuwan, Such beautiful requests and offerings should be wed;-)!I hope you find it! If you do please let us know it's possible, and not just a dream;-)!
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