|Reviewed by Trixie Love
Such a sad heartfelt
Written so beautiful.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
this one grabs the heart and squeezes it--very deeply felt this one--excellent, emotive, well written piece
((((((HUGS)))))--hope this is fiction
|Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
|Gripping and heartwrenching. Yes, love is a risk. You never know what is going to happen. But it is better to have loved and lost but to have never loved at all. Keep up the good work.
|Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader)
|This is very moving .
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Such a beautiful and moving poem, so well written, and so very sad,
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This has been well penned by the heart. Great write!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Oh this one grabs you by the heart and play 'Heartaches by the numbers" on it...very sad ,sas,damn sad poem!!
I know what this feels like all tooo well!!
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|..I snuck out of the ward down to the nurses room ..just a quick look at AD....hmm..and what do I find?..hmmm My dear friend Robert, in turmoil..No, no Rob,..love never leaves does it?...at least you have SOME beautiful memories..that's MORE than most of us can say isn't it?..a Beloved is ALWAYS there... be it in the physical or spirit..:)...
Beautiful write..well written ...the emotion just explodes and grips the reader...
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|John.. I can certainly relate to this... Very well done.. Reminds me of a song. Excellent!|
|Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington
|So many can relate to this as do I. Very emotionally charged... wonderfully written.
|Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)
|Very tear jerking poetry that exposes the heart and soul! Crying words like this are just..... this was fabu! Sad but very real and many know this same feeling.
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
This is superb in meter and message, as always! This one is full of emotional depth - beginning to end. The last verse is especially well done. Thanks for sharing.
|Reviewed by Linda Hill
|Great depth of emotion..
I'm sorry for your pain.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A splendid poem with such excellent rhyme and meter,even though sad in it's goodbye...|