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My Heavens Doorway
by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
Saturday, September 27, 2003

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You were standing in my doorway,
I didn't realize my heaven
would be in this doorway

Slowly, you started dropping your garments
one by one
Your smile was that
of an evil seductive devil

Like a horse's mane
flying in mid air,
your luscious black hair fell
on top of your shoulders

Completely nude
you slowly stepped
toward my presence
one-step, two step,

I watched every tiny movement
of your gorgeous shapely form
come towards me,
you are almost here,
my excitement is overwhelming

You are here,
we feel each other's hands
squeezing softly

I pulled you close to my body
we are now embe dded
in our doorway of heaven.

Copyright
1/27/02
Ron Axelson
Revised
9/27/03

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Reviewed by Kay P Devenish 10/31/2003
Heavenly!
Reviewed by Melissa Rives 10/4/2003

woo-hoo, now that sizzles, Ron!
Reviewed by serenety L 9/29/2003
Quite different to what you usually write, but I love it. And the pic is fantastic.
Nico
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 9/29/2003






You were standing in my doorway,
I didn't realize my heaven
would be in this doorway


Excellent write...deep deep sensual and romantic write.....BHUWAN
Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme 9/28/2003
Yummy one this Sketch...:0)
Reviewed by jude forese 9/28/2003
the sketch is just fantastic and the poem is perfect..
Reviewed by Trixie Love 9/28/2003
Hi Ron,
Such a soft romantic
write...
Simply beautiful...

Hugs,
Trixie :)
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 9/27/2003
Oh, yes, embedded... Sketchman, I am waiting for my breath to return.... great write....
In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Nancy D. 9/27/2003
Beautiful art work, and the doorway to heaven is devine.

Nancy
Reviewed by Lynn Barry 9/27/2003
Did you hit your head on the way in? This is surely not wacky weird Ron's work...just kidding...WOW...so seductive...so different from your other works...you are certainly versatile...and as I've written before...talented...why? cuzz you are...
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 9/27/2003
Lovely and senusal, just beautiful, Ron.
Reviewed by Jeanette Foresta 9/27/2003
Great job! I love your sketch, and the poem! :)
Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader) 9/27/2003
Mmmmmmmmmmmboy...wow!
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 9/27/2003
Beautiful Sketch; sensuos and intriging. Bill
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 9/27/2003
So very beautiful and sensual, Ron.. Love both pic and poem...
Your island friend,
Jenni
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/27/2003
(((ron)))

all i gotta say is *whew*

perfection! *it's gettin HOT in herre*

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

you lucky man :)
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/27/2003
excellent poem, beautiful sketch! but i think you done melted my monitor! LOL (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. :D love ya, sketchman!~
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 9/27/2003
Ron this is a gorgeous sketch...I have been wanting to see something serious from you and my friend this is it...fantastic picture..and fantastic poem to go with it...very nice work...floria
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/27/2003
Ron you hunk you remembered;-) this is great , sketch too hot to handle;-)x0x0x0xo
Reviewed by Bianca Boonstra 9/27/2003
Beautiful sketch. Combines well with the poem. You're hot!
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 9/27/2003
Wow..beautiful and so sensual, excellent Ron!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/27/2003
Sensual and smooth write Ron!!

Thought provoking too!!

Little devil!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/27/2003
Seductive write! The water sprinklers here at the den are going to turn on with this kind of heat!
Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers 9/27/2003
Sometimes we have to wait a few minutes before we close the doors. There are times when we are too eager to turn away. Great write Ron..Lisa
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