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| Reviewed by Carol DeVaney |
9/28/2003 |
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| Beautiful poem, Floreann. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/28/2003 |
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| absolutely beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
9/28/2003 |
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| Wonderful piece. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/28/2003 |
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| lovely write... |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/28/2003 |
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Stunning write Floreann!!
Geez...I like this one!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Dolores Dawes |
9/28/2003 |
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| Excellent Poem! This was very vivid to the imagination and quite soothing to read. Well written Floreann! |
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| Reviewed by Erica Ivory |
9/28/2003 |
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one with wings floating through the sky
or one who touches you
without reasons or wants
just to be near you
so constant,so powerful
share with me your glory
and I give you my sadness
I share joy and you speak of pain
yet without you I am nothing
BEAUTIFUL!! |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
9/28/2003 |
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| Beautiful! |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
9/28/2003 |
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Beautiful write.
I love the picture too.
John |
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| Reviewed by Zenith Elliott |
9/27/2003 |
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| Beautiful poem! ~Z~ |
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| Reviewed by Rosalyn Smith |
9/27/2003 |
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This is deep, I like the way you ended this with: I can hear your heart beating
keeping sweet time with mine.
Very beautifully written.
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| Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers |
9/27/2003 |
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| wow, so strong and graceful... lovely write |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
9/27/2003 |
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| Deep write! |
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| Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) |
9/27/2003 |
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| Utterly stunning....both your words and that lovely picture..ty for sharing.......Dani |
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