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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) |
9/30/2003 |
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Excellant powerful penning Marlene! The twist at the end, yes I 100% agree...BRILLIANT!
((((Hugs))))
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/30/2003 |
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| the fall of success powerfully portrayed... |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
9/29/2003 |
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| Marlene...this was powerful...floria |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
9/29/2003 |
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| Stunning piece! Profound and Unique! |
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| Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers |
9/29/2003 |
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| Marlene, well you woke me up! This is just an outstanding piece of work. This is one of those that once wasn't enough, so I went back for a second helping. Loved the images this produced. Lisa |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
9/29/2003 |
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| WHOA! Got to read this again. Sent my brain spinning it did! Amazing work! |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
9/29/2003 |
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| Excellent!!!! |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
9/28/2003 |
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| enjoyed readin this, it's certainly unique Marlene, right down to the ending, I'm at a lost for words. |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
9/28/2003 |
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| Loved the ending! Nice twist! Brilliant! |
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| Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) |
9/28/2003 |
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| Hi Marlene I really liked the ending allot, Al |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
9/28/2003 |
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Very insightful poem of that lawyer.
Taylor |
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