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| Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) |
9/30/2003 |
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These words are moving. It is one thing to lose yourself in love but it is another to lose "SELF" in it. If it breaks one's soul, indeed...it is NOT love. Your words are everything perfection defines! Your mind is something else lady! Library....this one goes.
Than You,
Teresa Emilie |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/30/2003 |
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Deep and emotive Retta!!
Men want us to be 3 things!!
A Lady in public
A whore in bed
A servant in the house!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
9/29/2003 |
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Awesome write! How well you have captured the feelings of one caged in someone else's perception of who they should be.
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/29/2003 |
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| A perfect description of anothers selfishness,greed, and ignorance! It's always what THEY want!You know it well Reindeer for you have expressed it to a T! |
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| Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader) |
9/29/2003 |
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Unreal Me,
Excellent Write ...
Excellent Way to express your heart ...
So beautiful and so nice ....
Loved it a lot ...
Love is real feeling of heart ...
I respect the love so badly ...
As i know what failure in love is ....
Had it once in life ....
:) ....
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
9/29/2003 |
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It's Unreel Me To True Love,i.e. Compassion!!!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) |
9/29/2003 |
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This is a great great great piece.
"let me cut away the pain"
Very powerful!
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| Reviewed by Tami Ryan |
9/29/2003 |
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Reindeer,
What I've learned is that when someone wants you to change who you are, it's a sign of that person's weakness - an attempt at control. Don't allow it, period. For yourself, OK?
This is one powerful write. Extraordinarily done!
Hugs to you,
Tami |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
9/29/2003 |
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| Superb! Very powerful! Do not ever change except for yourself! |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
9/29/2003 |
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How I identify with this after all the lives I've lived!!!!!!!! And I am 100% with Rages review.... excellent....
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Christine Morell |
9/29/2003 |
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An amazing, powerful piece Reindeer
~Chrissie |
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| Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) |
9/29/2003 |
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Oh Reindeer this one is excellent and so emotional i am with Belle...
"Men,
All the same,
Fall in love
With who you are…
Then it starts-
They want you to change,
Smile…
Play the game-
It’s not real,
it’s not me-
Can't you see?
How much I hate
What you’re doing to me"
LADY Peg
{{{HUGS}}}} |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
9/29/2003 |
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| Deep emotional write. Well done! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
9/29/2003 |
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| Grabs the heart and shakes it. |
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| Reviewed by Marilyn Seray |
9/29/2003 |
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This is a tumultuous emotional write
Very well expressed |
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| Reviewed by serenety L |
9/29/2003 |
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Excellent Retta !
Don't ever let him change you. Stay the way you are. You are the most important person to yourself - and nobody can force you to become somebody else.
Hope you are okay?
Love
Nico |
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| Reviewed by Dana Matthews (Reader) |
9/29/2003 |
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WOW RETTA!! Powerful writing. Your poetry has been one masterpiece right after another! Great job.
~Dana~ |
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