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Wandering Eyes
by Zenith Elliott

Monday, September 29, 2003

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The night has eyes...

                          Wandering eyes

                          lecherously seek

                          secret passions

                          hidden beneath

                          sultry covers

                          darkened shades

                          cracking paint

                          smoldering heat

                          wandering eyes

                          contentment fed

                          passion spent

                          secret safe

                          covers worn

                          shades impart

                          paint aglow

                          silent scorn...

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Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick 10/17/2003
darkly emotive
Reviewed by Candida Eittreim 10/11/2003
Very well written Zee. Crisp concise use of words here.

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 10/8/2003
There is something about this that is just so naughty--- at at the same time it is circled with the knowledge to know better! Gotta love THAT! FABU!!!

Teresa Emilie
Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman 10/6/2003
good momentum, you open the scandals world, a voyeuristic little romp, filled with pinpricks of impressionism.

Very good.
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 10/5/2003
perfect!!!..just love your work!!

Vesna oxoxoxox
Reviewed by Amor Sabor 10/1/2003
Love the contrasts in this write. The words bounce around in the balance.
Reviewed by jude forese 9/30/2003
like how you consolidate the images into the overall structure...
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 9/30/2003
Reviewed by Russ Okamura 9/30/2003
This is a very intriguing and stylish poem with a very profound meaning! Most excellent!
Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) 9/30/2003
Chrisp and delightful..
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/30/2003
Haunting Zenith!!

Paint is cracking for sure!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya 9/30/2003
Short but excellent!!!
Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 9/29/2003
Zing! Great Job
Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 9/29/2003
Mystic in the secret seen. Wonderfully penned, mi'lady.

Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) 9/29/2003
Excellent poetry.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 9/29/2003
I must say, this is great.
I guess the paint dried?
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 9/29/2003
Eyes Never Deceive Even Her His Mouth Not Alone Wandering!


Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 9/29/2003
I sense an introspection deeply rooted here.
Maybe me but good write!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader) 9/29/2003
Stunning...It does have eyes indeed...;)

ty, Dani
Reviewed by Victoria Noxon 9/29/2003
Wonderful write !
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/29/2003
Wonderfully done Z~has a powerful impact...
Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster 9/29/2003
An excellent, well penned write.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 9/29/2003
Great play of words!
Reviewed by Floreann Cawley 9/29/2003
a wonderful write..Floreann
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 9/29/2003
Well penned, haunting poetry.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader) 9/29/2003
Oh The dark side is beautiful when you issue the verses ~Z

Lady peg
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