|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|you brought it home with this one Linda. My dad never was around to help me do anything. I'm lucky I am the man I am today. No thanks to dear old dad. hugs G|
|Reviewed by L M (Reader)
|Oh this one is so needed Linda.
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|A very touching and powerful write from your pen, again, leaving me pondering the direction this society of ours takes and wondering when it will finally be corrected.
|Reviewed by J. Hart (Reader)
|This is so wonderful. Simple and what a message. -J. Hart|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|How touching this is Linda!!
Geez...you pulled my heartstrings to tears with this one Girl!!
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Heart touching write as always from you...cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|very touching write... well done!|
|Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy
|Unfortunately too many little kids could have placed that ad. Wonderful insight into the mind and desire of a child. Good job!
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
|Excellent _Sad Huh!
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|Linda, this is such a wonderful, tender write - straight from the heart. Thanks for this one.
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Wonderful, touching, and sad write.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|So very sad and well written from the heart of one who truly cares.|
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|Linda, I was and am lucky to have such wonderful parents. I shudder to think how my life would have been without them.|
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Linda this is so tender and so sad....and children who do have loving parents sometimes don't appreciate them...great poem..floria|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
what all children desire--profound and heartbreaking
too bad parents fail their kids
(((HUGS))) and love,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|heartwrenching write; thanks for sharing, linda! :( (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in texas, karen lynn. >tears <|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
|Oh Hello sweet heart.
This is so tender and so sad and it is
from your heart.