|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
|Clap clap Erin.....this is outstanding...I was spinning around it and got caught up in it...great write...floria|
|Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
This is just splendid! One of your very best poems I've seen!
Especially the opening verse!
The silently sounding shouting is
It just hits you right between the eyes!
You have simply GOT to submit this one to me for publication in Poetry in Emotion next summer!
|Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster
|Superb, superb write. Alliteration perfect!|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|WOW! Incredible write; excellent write, Erin! :D (((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Most excellent...you took me to a high...I could feel my head spinning for a moment!!
You know how to spin my head girl!!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|If its head rhymes you're after this is the place to settle in because Erin reigns surpreme.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|most interesting shockwaves. Very good poetic expression. tk G|
|Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader)
|Reviewed by Tyler Wiseman
|Good plotting, with the final shockwave a strangled flail.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by jude forese
|perfect alliteration to a powerful poem...|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Wonderful write Erin, and alliteration is superb!|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Wow..so powerful, so very moving, I loved this,
|Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader)
Erin your hard work shows well!
|Reviewed by Brenda Ross (Reader)
|I love all forms of alliteration. You are a genius, Erin. It is always a pleasure to read your clever poems.|
|Reviewed by Robin Spicer
A well written piece. Thank you for sharing.