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Pessimistic Pimple
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There is a pessimistic pimple
In the countenance of the optimistic
And at times that pimple debases
The resolution of the optimistic
By loss of spirit, as spirit merges
With the perplexity of the mind
Over the heart and heart over
The mind, to the circumstance’s
Shade, where the murky chasm gapes.

Copyright 2003 Bhuwan Thapaliya

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Reviewed by Bobbi Duffy 10/6/2003
what a wonderful way to express that the nagative is what makes the positive possible in the dichotomy we know as life. It is the overcoming of the negative that makes us successful as humans, not the absence of its existance. Great Write Bhuwan!
Reviewed by na na (Reader) 10/5/2003
Bhuwan, you plunged again into the chasm and came out with a negative covering a positive. What happens to the positive. Does it turn negative or remain positive with a blemish. But in this case the blemish will heal and disappear and the positive will once again be made whole and fully reality. No blemish, no disintegration. Everything you see will be made whole. Wonder with our Seer Andre agrees? Your friend Bill
Reviewed by Vesna Blueflame 10/5/2003
..Ohhhh Bhuwan..I am enriched every time I visit your site!!!!! This is a most profound write..the truth of it hits you right between the eyes...hmmm...excellent! Ty
Warm wishes ,

Reviewed by jude forese 10/4/2003
well done! profound imagery and idea...
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 10/4/2003
Deep write. Keep on writing.....
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 10/4/2003
A profound, thought-provoking write, my friend. Very well done!

Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 10/3/2003
Deeply philosophical! Well done.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/3/2003
Interesting viewpoint. Great write!
Reviewed by Tarek Hassan 10/3/2003
You delve into the deep subconscious domains of existence. Write on dear poet.
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) 10/3/2003
Excellent meaning and Depth.....
Reviewed by Dale Clark 10/3/2003
This is quite unique. Something to think on.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 10/3/2003
Different, unique and thought provoking.
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 10/3/2003
This was outstanding! excellently written, loved this,

Reviewed by Paul Berube 10/3/2003
Bhuwan, very deep and totally well done. Outstanding piece of work.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/3/2003
Oxy-cute them pimples!!

That pimple has another name too...
I call it the "Spiders" in my skull!!

Eliminate them...and I will never be able to write!!

So I think we need those pimples and spiders to ignite our emotions deep inside...don't you think?

Some are not welcome...but some are needed.. to keep us on alert!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 10/3/2003
I will have to read this again..i feel it has a very deep meaning.. You make my mind awaken with this.. The art could bot be better..

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