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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/3/2003 |
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| Your work is so intense and heart stopping Erica!I'm so glad you can write like this!Superb! |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
10/3/2003 |
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Excellent_
The Only True Family Is In The Eye's Of (God)'s Tear's!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Walter Jones |
10/3/2003 |
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Doors hide many things, a society on the edge of distruction. This is a great poem.
Walt |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/3/2003 |
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This is so very sad Erica!!
and this happens soooo many times in life!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) |
10/3/2003 |
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Oh this touched me deeply that last three lines.
Taylor |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
10/3/2003 |
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| Heart wrenching and so very realistic. Well penned Erica. |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
10/3/2003 |
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Oh Dear, This one just affected me so deeply, have a few of those memories myself, excellent and outstandingly written,
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) |
10/3/2003 |
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| Wonderful work.. |
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