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Night Falls, and Continues to Fall
by Tyler Joseph Wiseman

Sunday, October 05, 2003

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PP in Makata

I watched the night fall
flat on it's face
I then wondered,
if it's so clumsy,
why does night fall
and the sun set,
when in fact,
the night is set for hours,
and the sun keeps tripping
on it's myriad skirts
I became designed
by dearth and desire,
through color and shade
as it inundated perception
and made from my feet of clay
a new face upon the horizon

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Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader) 12/5/2003
Wonderfully playful and complex wordsmithing, Tyler, and a nice metaphor for each reader to interpret as they will...
Reviewed by Susan Phillips 11/3/2003
This is a clever poem that made me smile, yet touched me. I particularly liked:
"the night is set for hours,
and the sun keeps tripping
on it's myriad skirts "
Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader) 10/22/2003
Profound and an excellent write.

Reviewed by Lawrance Lux 10/17/2003
Is it Night and Day which fall and rise, or only humanity? Can a new face upon the horizon bring a betterment? lgl
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 10/8/2003
Does it ever end?
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 10/8/2003
Excellent imagery, Tyler. Wonderfully worded! ~Z~
Reviewed by Kevin Mc Crum (Reader) 10/7/2003
This is exceptional. Lyrical, crafty, meter, images, thought, everything!
Reviewed by Candida Eittreim 10/6/2003
This is simply wonderful.

Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/6/2003
wonderfully imaginative!
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 10/6/2003
This is very profound, Tyler. I've read it three times, and I see a "twist" in the last verse that puts a whole different essence on the whole piece. Without it, it would just be a reflective write, but that last verse makes it a profound truth to be pondered and remembered. Thank you for sharing, Tyler...
In Spirit,
Reviewed by jude forese 10/5/2003
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 10/5/2003
Sometimes we are wondered how the words came to us in the first place. An intriguing write.

May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Jessica Stanfield 10/5/2003
Oooohhh....this is good! I like the way the words drip from the tongue. Great job with this!
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