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Surrender..oldie/repost
by Erica Ivory

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Good bye love..
I have been robbed blind..
Good bye dreams..
They have been drowned..
By life.
This world is not kind..
on this doorstep..
where I slept
lost my step..
Because if you don't
sell your soul
If you rebel..
you must pay the toll..
Happiness I cannot bring..
Songs of joy I cannot sing..
For even freedom
has broken wings
My life is destruction
that is all..
She who climbs to high
eventually falls..
Speaking out load
is forsaken..
my secrets
would be stolen.
Thoughts of ever
escaping taken....
Freedom...
A meaningless word
when all is said and done..
Just a dream I have..
To help me carry on..
but my strength
has become so frail..
I wave this white flag..
and surrender..
to betrayal.

ERICA


 


 



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Reviewed by David Mohd 10/7/2003
In fact what happened us? Why do we fight one another and kill?I think the reason and answer is within us.Erica you have a good heart.so don't be upset,bcoz u r the winner.Good write and highly inflamable and thoughtful.
david
Reviewed by William Bonilla 10/6/2003
Excellent write Erica
wonderful reading
loved it

William
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 10/6/2003
Powerful gripping poem, Erica! Well done!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK 10/6/2003
Excellent- I Know You Won't Surrender!

TRASK
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/6/2003
Great write!
Reviewed by Trixie Love 10/6/2003
Ouch Erica,
I felt the pain with this.
Thank God it is an oldie.

Well Penned...

Trixie :)
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 10/6/2003
Glad you reposted, this is a great poem, grips the heart.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/6/2003
Sad touching write Erica!!
love Tinka

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