|Reviewed by a- maryllis
This is one of your best. :)
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|That flame is brighter from a child.|
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|Wow.. Don't change a thing... This was superb... Honestly DON'T CHANGE A THING.. How bittersweet!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|an excellent write ...Adam
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Dear Adam.. I still see that little boy, shining out at me from the same bright, blue eyes... he's not that far away. Perhaps he's that 'protector' you told me of.. who battles your demons and refuses to leave your 'side'.. Hold tight to him, sweet son, he's your friend.. he's you! I love you, MOM/katy xox.|
|Reviewed by Laura Via
|That last stanza is just beautiful ... full of hope and light.
|Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
|Excellent word play in the third stanza, Adam Glad I dropped in!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very precious write Adam!!
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Adam, the adage, "out of the mouth of babes" and the like come shining through in this write of yours. How wonderful and precious, uplifting... stay strong...