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| Reviewed by 000 000 |
2/7/2010 |
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You have captured the spirit of a warriors death!
Love and sunshine, Carol3Hawks |
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| Reviewed by Josephine Linville |
9/8/2007 |
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| All I can say is wow and that it has touched me. |
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| Reviewed by Melissa Rives |
10/17/2003 |
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This is just the most beautiful thing you've written....I love it!!!!
Hugs...Melissa |
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| Reviewed by Vicky Jeter |
10/14/2003 |
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Hi Karla
This is Really Cool! One of my favorites of yours,
as well. Vicky |
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| Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya |
10/9/2003 |
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| Karla...one of ure very best.....BHUWAN |
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| Reviewed by Russ Okamura |
10/9/2003 |
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| This epitomizes the fact that you have a true warriors soul! Your words are majestic as well as artistic. You truly know how to pour your passion on a written page. So very excellent! |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
10/9/2003 |
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Karla, I am in shivering tears here... I would love to see the picture that prompted this poem in you.. It is truly the warrior Spirit, but it's not calling you, Karla. It's telling you, you are a warrior woman... your spirit is strong and true... they know their kind by their spirits... excellent write, Karla, it's already in my library... stay strong, love and hugs back at ya....
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) |
10/9/2003 |
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| This touched me Karla...I feel like this many times...powerful write here...and kind of how I am feeling right now...so I really related to it..sad poem...touching my heart....floria |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) |
10/9/2003 |
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| Karla is is amazing, the spirit and force behind it. One of your very best. |
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| Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii) |
10/9/2003 |
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| In a word "Outstanding". I feel this one and I am in awe, it sounds as if the ancients are speaking to us through you. < < < < < <HUGS>>>>> Mikii |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/9/2003 |
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Somewhat different from you but well written Karla!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster |
10/9/2003 |
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| A clever and creative poem. Excellent write. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
10/9/2003 |
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Wonderfully done poem, keep up the great work!
God Bless
~Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/9/2003 |
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| wise and provocative... |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
10/9/2003 |
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And how wonderful it would be to recognize that moment. To be so at peace with oneself and others. Good words, Karla. Thank you for posting this.
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington |
10/8/2003 |
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A most wonderful tribute to a cultural tradition. Those words have touched me ever since I first heard them in "Little Big Man". I love how you expanded on this thought.
(((hugs)))
~Jackie~
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
10/8/2003 |
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Something totally different for you, excellent work.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/8/2003 |
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| Ah Karla, it seems as though you have found your words quite nicely. As for this poem, it strikes a chord for some reason within...with past depressions I have always thought of the term, " a good day to die!" As it is here, regarding the indian brave killed on the battlefield, when we die in battle for that which we believe in, any day is a good day to die...Peace & Thanks for an expecially eye opening piece, ED |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/8/2003 |
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| Very well done! Today was a good day to read your poem!! |
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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
10/8/2003 |
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| Chilling write Karla! Eerie! Content is good though but it is a touchy subject some might say. Although those who have illnesses, or disabilites, are not afraid to talk of death. I think I shall write a poem. You have inspired me, THANKS! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/8/2003 |
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| This is a truly excellent and wonderfully expressive write Karla! |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
10/8/2003 |
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| Very interesting piece. Good job. |
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| Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader) |
10/8/2003 |
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I just finished reading a book about the Indian removal. IE: The trail of tears among other things. It just boggles ones minds what the native Americans endured. And it lays so heavy on my heart.
What a wonderful write hun.. Thank you.
Melanie |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
10/8/2003 |
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| Good warrior write! |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
10/8/2003 |
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This was so excellent Karla..beautifully written!
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/8/2003 |
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| terrific write, karla; powerfully and eloquent in its statement. very well done! truly enjoyed~! (((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
10/8/2003 |
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| this is wonderful, i love to read and write american indian poetry and this seems to be of that genre and it is excellent |
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