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Obscure relationship dialogue
by Tyler Joseph Wiseman

Thursday, October 09, 2003

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Why are you doing this;
do you need me to quicken you?
Lay an offering on the throne of my desire
and write only as if life depended upon it
and I shall sustain you through troubled times
.
I shall write of our lives tragic play,
singing the words you spoke to me
in earnest desperation, wearing your soddy velvet
and a bittersweet smile that smelled of chocolate;
I will be the insubstantial everything you crave
.
It must be said, however, that I will not weep
for every little death you subject yourself to
for I know you are weak as clinging vines
and I shall not have it infectious to me
nor be responsive to your terrible incidences of life
.
She has already decided
that no answers will be given


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Reviewed by C.S. Snow (Reader) 11/6/2003
This kind of thing works both ways, and sometimes can be said by both
partners in any relationship. And, you've put it very well.

I particularly like "I will be the insubstantial everything you crave
It must be said, however, that I will not weep
for every little death you subject yourself to"

This is the rarest look inside the mind of the artist, and it works well.
-C.S.
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 10/25/2003
"She has already decided
that no answers will be given"

Well done!
Tami



Reviewed by Lawrance Lux 10/17/2003
Where do they take you, and why? Can We ever really know? We have to protect Ourselves. lgl
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader) 10/10/2003
Absolutely brilliant and as usual, trenchant and cuttingly human!

These verses really hit home!

and I shall sustain you through troubled times


What is that folksong from the 60's that I just can't quite recall, the title of which is SO similar to this verse?

I adore your poetry.


Richard Vallance

Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/9/2003
An interesting slant on relationships. Great write!
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/9/2003
Arouses the senses very effective ,excellent work!
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz 10/9/2003
Wow! Palpable emotions, here.
And those last 2 lines are the most telling.
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