|Reviewed by C.S. Snow (Reader)
|This kind of thing works both ways, and sometimes can be said by both
partners in any relationship. And, you've put it very well.
I particularly like "I will be the insubstantial everything you crave
It must be said, however, that I will not weep
for every little death you subject yourself to"
This is the rarest look inside the mind of the artist, and it works well.
|Reviewed by Tami Ryan
|"She has already decided
that no answers will be given"
|Reviewed by Lawrance Lux
|Where do they take you, and why? Can We ever really know? We have to protect Ourselves. lgl|
|Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
|Absolutely brilliant and as usual, trenchant and cuttingly human!
These verses really hit home!
and I shall sustain you through troubled times
What is that folksong from the 60's that I just can't quite recall, the title of which is SO similar to this verse?
I adore your poetry.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|An interesting slant on relationships. Great write!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Arouses the senses very effective ,excellent work!|
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|Wow! Palpable emotions, here.
And those last 2 lines are the most telling.