|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|nicely expressed Erica. Dreams do come out this way sometimes and some of them scare the h out of you. But it was only a dream, back to reality. hugs G|
|Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
|As empty as our dreams may seem to us, we can't allow ourselves to let go of them. When we do, it's all over. Great write Erica. Lisa|
|Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
|very stong... a person cannot be other then who they are no matter how others try to shape them or their world.... good write|
|Reviewed by na na (Reader)
|Oh boy Erica, what a pleasure to read a poem like this. Maybe it will always be a work in progress, as you reach for the stars and take them in your hand one by one; making beautiful poems for the world to read and enjoy. How I love your poetry! Bill
|Reviewed by Lee Garrett
|beutifully executed work. Profound and insightful. Sometimes, there's nothing else to do but change faces and start the journey of self again.|
|Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
|I do not know what to say....this piece is outstanding. Great, wonderful and outstanding.
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader)
This is a wonderful write!
I loved it.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Very deep touching write Erica!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Erica, This doesn't need any more work, it is gloriously complete!|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|AN OUTSTANDING WRITE ... ERICA
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|Erica, what a profound write....especially those last lines... don't think this could be changed.... excellent write...
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|This one goes deep. Great write!|
|Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
I could feel the depth of this one.
"Sculpted by anthers idle hand.
Not excepted as I am..
Now just dirty angel wings..
on dirty floors of dreams..
Wondering how I ever got here..
And what this life means.."