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Sky Curves
by Amor Sabor

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From where I stand, the sky curves
though I cannot see it casting shadows
Horizontal such as the distant field
where blood spills in mythic battles

It seems to me the constellations poise
in the blue-black sea of night
Keeping distance parallel to months
constantly moving after taking flight

Some were named after ancient Gods
and some animals that are found on earth
while some planets brightly come and go
and are said to rule over us from birth

I am one who may defy those gods
for my beliefs are reserved for one
The same who created all of heaven and earth
and all else underneath the sun

Yet, I remain in awe of such majesty
as I am fascinated by their light
Though I am limited by the bleach of day
and then cleansed again another night

The battles raged are between warriors
stretched beyond time in distant space
and Goddesses in the midst of galaxies
who disappear at dawn without a trace

From where I stand, the sky curves
a wheel of influence upon our lives
each time I look into the blue-black night
to spy the heavens until dawn arrives

2003 Amor Sabor

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Reviewed by Silent Dream 8/16/2007
Drawn to stargazing as well, with the stories, myths and creation's wonders in mind. Sky curves, beautiful.

((Hugs and LOve)) ~SilentDream
Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com 6/4/2004
This is an awesome corollary to what will happen with Venus eclipsing the Sun on June 8, 2004!

Peace 2 U,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Reviewed by Rodd Jokre 10/20/2003
VERY nice write... Thanks for sharing! ;0
Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader) 10/19/2003
so I see what I have been missing...as awesome as ever, Aztec Panther..

love&light,
**Me**
Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie 10/14/2003
This was perfect and so beautiful, outstanding!

Reindeer
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader) 10/14/2003
A BRILLIANT BREATHTAKING MASTERPIECE AMOR!!!!
I can't pick a favorite line like I know some like to do...Y...because the WHOLE PIECE is a favorite!
<Click into my library it goes>
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~
Reviewed by Trixie Love 10/14/2003
Hi Amor,
A true gem of a write...


Trixie :)
Reviewed by Marilyn Seray 10/13/2003
what glorious work (as always) I had the pleasure of reading.
Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson 10/13/2003
Very beautiful, Amor! So many great lines, here!

"I am one who may defy those gods
for my beliefs are reserved for one
The same who created all of heaven and earth
and all else underneath the sun "

Amen!
Reviewed by L M (Reader) 10/13/2003
Excellent and masterful poetry.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 10/13/2003
Breathtakingly beautiful Amor!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader) 10/13/2003
Breathtakingly beautiful, Amor.
Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) 10/13/2003
Nothing I could add to such beauty.
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 10/13/2003
Brilliant work Amor, I love the conclusion in this piece. Bravo!

Love, JC xoxoxo
Reviewed by Dale Clark 10/13/2003
Awesome write, Amor! Brilliant!
Reviewed by Taylor Trenton (Reader) 10/12/2003
Very flowing and excellent poetry.
Reviewed by Handsum Hart 10/12/2003
way way cool, I like battles between warriors, Zena was my favorite tv show
"The battles raged are between warriors
stretched beyond time in distant space
and Goddesses in the midst of galaxies
who disappear at dawn without a trace"

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington 10/12/2003
Your pen flows magnificently well today. Terrific write!

~Jackie~
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 10/12/2003
Wonderful write on the night sky. Interesting insight into you. Great ending!
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson 10/12/2003
The heavens I guess are the biggest of mysteries..
I love looking at the dark, blue, night skys myself
excellent write Amor
Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader) 10/12/2003
This is perfection! You rip into everything here! I love it! Your visuals and chronology....the usage of Gods & galaxies and everything was amazing! PER FECTION! I don't know how to review this. Breath taking truth. This is probably one of my favorites of yours, it goes into the library. You blew me away! Fine fine work!

Thank You,
Emilie

pssst....lmao at Rage ... I love his raw truth and opinion :)
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 10/12/2003
as always, excellent
.... third attempt to post..
new kitten on the keyboard
Reviewed by E T Waldron 10/12/2003
A change of pace for you Amor, beautifully done. I love the premise and agree with you, though the universe is an ever evolving neverending mystery, so we will have many surprises, I'm sure;-).
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader) 10/12/2003
"Though I am limited by the bleach of day
and then cleansed again another night "

Amor these are some fantastic lines with great imagery in this write...I love to gaze up at the night sky and wonder...just what is up there...loved this poem so well written...floria
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 10/12/2003
Awesomewwrite, Amor... I loved this verse..

"Yet, I remain in awe of such majesty
as I am fascinated by their light
Though I am limited by the bleach of day
and then cleansed again another night "

Jenni

Reviewed by Transcendental Poet (Reader) 10/12/2003
Brilliant Poesy!
Reviewed by Tami Ryan 10/12/2003
Beautiful write, Amor! I especially liked this line:
"Though I am limited by the bleach of day"

Tami

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